List— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, we usually make list while doing a shopping because I think that it's necessary. Also while doing a shopping we may forgot something to bought at that time. When we look over the list and the glossaries that we taken, we can be able to find more satisfied level of sobbing at that time. So me and my mother used to do it.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Actually, I'm not into our work, I'm a student. So yeah, I make a list if I do work because I as I said, that it's important and it's help to not forget any things, which is important and basically made people more.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think that it's all about the personal preference. For example, some people are very good at remembering at that time they can memorize the things very well. So they don't like to get into trouble while making a list and it take a time. Well, some are not that much eligible to remember the things, so they make.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer making list in a mobile phone rather than a PayPal because we usually carry our mobile everywhere we went at that time. It's very easy to watch and just buy the thing.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and correct grammar. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word forms. For example, use 'shopping list' instead of 'list' alone, and 'forget to buy' instead of 'forgot something to bought'.
Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, when I check the list, I don't forget important items. Therefore, my mother and I always prepare a list before shopping.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Start with a direct response, then explain why you make lists. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'basically made people more'.
Example: I am a student, so I don't have a regular job. However, when I have tasks to do, I make a list because it helps me remember important things and stay organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Your answer has good content but needs clearer expression and better linking. Use correct phrases like 'take time' instead of 'take a time' and avoid awkward expressions like 'not that much eligible'.
Example: I think it depends on personal preference. Some people have a good memory, so they don't like making lists because it takes time. However, others prefer lists to avoid forgetting important things.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has incorrect words like 'PayPal' instead of 'paper'. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and clear sentences. Start with a direct answer, then explain why with specific reasons and linking words.
Example: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because I always carry my phone with me. This makes it easy to check the list anytime and buy what I need quickly.
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