List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'Umm' and redundant phrases such as 'you will buy all the things that you need' after already stating the purpose of the list. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need, ensuring I don't forget any important items.

Suggestion: Your response is relevant but could be improved by combining sentences and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to provide more specific details about how the list helps you at work.

Example: Yes, I sometimes make lists for work because they help me remember all my tasks and complete my scheduled activities efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer does not directly address the question and is confusing. The question asks why some people dislike making lists, but your answer suggests the opposite. Try to clearly state reasons why some people avoid lists, and support your answer with specific details.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find them restrictive or feel that lists add unnecessary pressure to complete tasks.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more concise and natural. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'at a low level of battery' and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I find both methods useful, but I prefer writing lists on paper because my phone's battery might die when I need it most.

× Umm, it makes you not to forget something that you need.

✓ Umm, it helps you not to forget something that you need.

The phrase 'makes you not to forget' is incorrect because 'make' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Also, 'make' in this context is better replaced with 'helps' to convey the intended meaning. Therefore, 'helps you not to forget' is correct.

× Because it can help them to do everything they need not to forget the important tasks that they have to accomplish.

✓ Because it can help them do everything they need and not forget the important tasks that they have to accomplish.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'help them to do everything they need not to forget', which is confusing and ungrammatical. The phrase should be split to clearly express two ideas: helping them do everything they need and helping them not forget important tasks. Also, 'help' is followed by the base verb without 'to' in this context.

× Both of them can be helpful, but I prefer to write on the paper because maybe at that moment that I'm trying to buy my phone would be at a low level of battery and it doesn't help me.

✓ Both of them can be helpful, but I prefer to write on paper because maybe at that moment when I'm trying to buy, my phone would have a low battery level and it wouldn't help me.

The phrase 'write on the paper' is incorrect; 'write on paper' is the correct expression when referring to paper in general. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and the use of 'that' is incorrect; 'when' is appropriate to indicate the time. Additionally, 'would be at a low level of battery' is unnatural; 'would have a low battery level' is better. Finally, 'it doesn't help me' should be 'it wouldn't help me' to match the conditional context.