List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid excessive hesitation and filler words like 'uh' and 'well'. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific supporting details using linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.'

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time. For instance, last week I wrote down all the ingredients for a recipe, so I didn't forget anything at the store.

Suggestion: Focus on structuring your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas. For example, say, 'Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively.'

Example: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively. For example, by listing my daily duties, I can prioritize important tasks and complete them on time.

Suggestion: Reduce hesitation and filler words to make your answer more fluent. Use clear linking words such as 'because' and 'while' to compare ideas logically. Also, be more specific in your explanation. For example, say, 'Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory, while others find writing lists helpful to stay organized.'

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory, while others find writing lists helpful to stay organized. For instance, my friend never writes lists but still remembers everything, whereas I always write lists to avoid forgetting tasks.

Suggestion: Try to speak more fluently and avoid repeating words. Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'so'. For example, say, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have it with me.'

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have it with me. So, when I go shopping, I can quickly check the list and tell the shopkeeper what I need.

× whenever I'm going outside, uh, for some shopping

✓ whenever I go outside, uh, for some shopping

The phrase 'I'm going' uses the present continuous tense, which is not appropriate here because the sentence refers to a habitual action. The simple present tense 'I go' should be used to indicate regular or repeated actions.

× I do, uh, a list of, I make a list of, uh, all these material and ingredients which I will take from the shop

✓ I make a list of all these materials and ingredients that I will take from the shop

The phrase 'a list of' is correct, but 'do a list of' is incorrect. Also, 'material' should be pluralized to 'materials' to match the plural 'ingredients'. The relative pronoun 'which' is better replaced with 'that' in defining clauses.

× all these material and ingredients

✓ all these materials and ingredients

The word 'material' is uncountable in this context and should be pluralized to 'materials' to agree with 'ingredients', which is plural. This ensures subject consistency.

× So it will really help me, uh, during, uh, during my shopping and I can just.

✓ So it will really help me during my shopping, and I can just shop more efficiently.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding a complete thought after 'I can just' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× I just make a good schedule, schedule for my work

✓ I just make a good schedule for my work

The repetition of the word 'schedule' is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing the duplicate improves sentence clarity.

× So it will really help me during my how to organize my work and my time and my routine

✓ So it will really help me organize my work, my time, and my routine

The phrase 'during my how to organize' is incorrect. The preposition 'during' is not needed here; instead, the verb 'help' should be followed directly by the base verb 'organize'.

× So it will it will really a great impact on my life that I also manage

✓ So it will really have a great impact on my life, helping me manage better

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Adding the verb 'have' and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× some people just remember all the things, uh, which they need to, uh, take from the store and while other, while other needs, uh, while other, uh, just need to, uh, figure it out and write it down somewhere on page and on, uh, phone

✓ some people just remember all the things they need to take from the store, while others just need to figure it out and write it down somewhere on a page or on their phone

The phrase 'while other, while other needs' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Other' should be pluralized to 'others' to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'on page' needs an article 'a', and 'on phone' should be 'on their phone' for clarity.

× So it really depends on every nature

✓ So it really depends on each individual's nature

The phrase 'depends on every nature' is incorrect. 'Every' should be replaced with 'each individual's' to correctly express the idea.

× I usually use MO my phone, my phone more, uh, at every time

✓ I usually use my phone more, uh, all the time

The phrase 'at every time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'all the time' to indicate frequency. Also, 'MO' seems to be a filler or error and should be removed.

× I can just put it out on my pocket and I can just, uh, tell the shopkeeper that these kind of things I need for my shopping so they can easily just get

✓ I can just put it in my pocket and tell the shopkeeper that these kinds of things I need for my shopping, so they can easily get them

The preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to putting something in a pocket. 'These kind of things' should be 'these kinds of things' to agree in number. The sentence is also restructured for clarity and completeness.