List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and includes a request that is not relevant to the question. Try to respond directly and naturally by stating why you make a list, and avoid asking for help. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time at the store.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on giving a clear, structured response with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to explain how making lists helps you organize work and mention any limitations.

Example: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks. However, sometimes priorities change, so I have to adjust my list accordingly.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and use natural phrasing.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on memory. Additionally, they may feel that making lists is unnecessary or difficult.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid awkward phrasing like "make the notice."

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's easy to check and update my list whenever I remember something.

× Some people do not like to making list because of laziness and they think first of all they they have to memorize the things they do.

✓ Some people do not like making lists because of laziness and they think first of all they have to memorize the things they do.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form without 'to', so 'like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'like making'. Also, 'list' should be plural as it refers to lists in general.

× Some people do not like to making list because of laziness and they think first of all they they have to memorize the things they do.

✓ Some people do not like making lists because of laziness and they think first of all they have to memorize the things they do.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general concept of making lists, not a single list.

× I often make a list for my words because it helped me to it helped me to organize my work and sometimes it work sometime due to the some, some worker have to more important than we have to do first of them.

✓ I often make a list for my work because it helps me to organize my work, and sometimes it works because some tasks are more important and have to be done first.

The verb 'work' should be in the present tense 'works' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'helped me to it helped me to' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'helps me to'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I often make a list for my words because it helped me to it helped me to organize my work and sometimes it work sometime due to the some, some worker have to more important than we have to do first of them.

✓ I often make a list for my work because it helps me to organize my work, and sometimes it works because some tasks are more important and have to be done first.

The verb 'work' must be in the third person singular form 'works' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I prefer to make a list on the phone because due to modernization, we have a phone all the time with us.

✓ I prefer to make a list on the phone because, due to modernization, we have our phones with us all the time.

The phrase 'due to modernization' should be set off by commas for clarity. Also, 'a phone all the time with us' is awkward; 'our phones with us all the time' is more natural.

× I prefer to make a list on the phone because due to modernization, we have a phone all the time with us.

✓ I prefer to make a list on the phone because, due to modernization, we have our phones with us all the time.

Using 'a phone' is less appropriate than 'our phones' when referring to phones that people commonly carry. The pronoun 'our' correctly indicates possession.