List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence onek bar bar use kora hoyeche. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke sohoje, shothik bhabe rakhte, ar proyojon moto linking words use korte. Apnar answer ke 3-4 sentence e shongkhipto rakhun, jate proshner uttor spostho hoy.

Example: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because I can't remember everything at once. Making a list helps me remember the items I need, especially groceries. This way, I don't forget anything important.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu confusion ache, ar sentence gulo boro ar complex. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor spostho rakhte, ar sentence gulo ke chhoto rakhte. Linking words use kore uttor ke logical banan. Apni bolte paren keno list follow korte paren na, ar ki ki follow korte paren.

Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work. However, I don't always follow it completely. Sometimes, I manage to complete a few important tasks from the list.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar sentence structure er problem ache. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor ke spostho, sohoje bujha jay emon bhabe bolte. Linking words use korun jate uttor logical hoy. Apni specific karon dite paren jemon manush ra keno list banate pochondo kore na.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time. They believe they can remember what to buy or prefer to choose items spontaneously while shopping.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar word choice er problem ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik grammar diye rakhte, ar proshner uttor ke spostho bhabe bolte. Apni linking words use kore uttor ke logical banan. Apni specific karon dite paren keno phone e list banano bhalo.

Example: I used to prefer making lists on paper because phones were not common when I was a child. But now, I find it better to use my phone for lists since I can set reminders and it's more convenient.

× Yes, of course I make list before going to shopping because I can't remember everything at once and least make me a remember those things which I I needed.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list before going shopping because I can't remember everything at once and the list helps me remember those things which I need.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it needs the article 'a'. Also, 'going to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'going shopping'. 'Least' is a typo for 'list'. The phrase 'make me a remember' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me remember'. The tense 'needed' should be present 'need' to match the context.

× Yes, of course I make list before going to shopping because I can't remember everything at once and least make me a remember those things which I I needed.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list before going shopping because I can't remember everything at once and the list helps me remember those things which I need.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' without 'to'. This is a common preposition error.

× And I make a list of the grocery whenever I go.

✓ And I make a list of the groceries whenever I go.

The word 'grocery' here should be plural 'groceries' because it refers to multiple items.

× Yes, I every time make a list for my work, but actually I and at the end I didn't follow it but I follow a couple things in between these all list.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work, but actually, in the end, I don't always follow it, though I follow a couple of things from the list.

'Every time' is better replaced with 'always' for naturalness. The phrase 'a couple things' should be 'a couple of things'. 'These all list' is incorrect; it should be 'the list'. Also, tense consistency is needed: 'didn't follow' changed to 'don't always follow' to match present context.

× Because they think it's waste of time like they can remember whenever they go to grocery shop or they will find something new to shop more or or they will just see and get remember that what is they needed.

✓ Because they think it's a waste of time, like they can remember whenever they go to the grocery shop or they will find something new to buy, or they will just see and remember what they need.

'It's waste of time' needs the article 'a'. 'Get remember' is incorrect; it should be 'remember'. 'What is they needed' is incorrect; it should be 'what they need'. Also, 'shop more' is better expressed as 'buy'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Because they think it's waste of time like they can remember whenever they go to grocery shop or they will find something new to shop more or or they will just see and get remember that what is they needed.

✓ Because they think it's a waste of time, like they can remember whenever they go to the grocery shop or they will find something new to buy, or they will just see and remember what they need.

The phrase 'go to grocery shop' needs the definite article 'the' before 'grocery shop'. Also, 'to shop more' is incorrect; 'to buy' is the correct verb here.

× I depend on people.

✓ I depend on myself.

The phrase 'I depend on people' contradicts the context where the speaker talks about others not liking lists. Likely, the intended meaning is 'I depend on myself' meaning the speaker relies on their own memory or methods.

× Before I prefer least on a paper are because when I was child there was no not that much phone available as nowadays.

✓ Before, I preferred lists on paper because when I was a child, there were not as many phones available as nowadays.

'Least' is a typo for 'list'. 'On a paper are' is incorrect; it should be 'lists on paper'. 'No not that much phone' is incorrect; it should be 'not as many phones'. 'When I was child' needs the article 'a' before 'child'. Tense corrected to past 'preferred'.

× Before I prefer least on a paper are because when I was child there was no not that much phone available as nowadays.

✓ Before, I preferred lists on paper because when I was a child, there were not as many phones available as nowadays.

The phrase 'on a paper are' is incorrect; it should be 'lists on paper'. Also, 'no not that much phone' is incorrect preposition and quantifier usage; 'not as many phones' is correct.

× But nowadays bring up paper to grocery is odd.

✓ But nowadays, bringing paper to the grocery store is odd.

The verb 'bring' should be in the gerund form 'bringing' to act as the subject of the sentence. Also, 'grocery' should be 'grocery store' for clarity.

× So it's better to make a list in phone and you can also set a reminder for it.

✓ So it's better to make a list on the phone and you can also set a reminder for it.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'phone'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to devices.