List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答较为口语化且有语法错误，建议使用更自然流畅的表达，并避免重复。可以先直接回答问题，然后简要说明原因。

Example: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I see and need at the moment.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够连贯的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和连接词，使回答更自然且逻辑清晰。

Example: I used to make lists for my work, but they didn't always help because I couldn't follow them strictly. So now, I prefer to handle tasks spontaneously.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，并具体说明原因。

Example: Some people dislike making lists because unexpected tasks often interrupt their plans. For example, last year, even though I liked making lists, unexpected requests from my family sometimes disrupted my schedule.

Suggestion: 回答较为自然，但有重复和断句问题，建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用连贯的句子。

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I always have my phone with me, so I can quickly jot down any ideas or tasks.

× I just think what I need in my mind and when I'm going shopping I just see, oh, that's I want, so I just grab it very casually so I don't make a list.

✓ I just think about what I need in my mind and when I'm going shopping I just see, oh, that's what I want, so I just grab it very casually so I don't make a list.

句中缺少介词“about”，正确表达是“think about something”，表示“思考某事”。此外，“that's I want”应为“that's what I want”，需要加上关系代词“what”来引导宾语从句。

× Now in the past I made a list for my work and I think it didn't work.

✓ In the past, I made a list for my work and I think it didn't work.

“Now in the past”表达矛盾，应去掉“Now”，直接用“In the past”表示过去时间。

× Well, because they are always unexpected tasks to to stop the plan.

✓ Well, because there are always unexpected tasks that stop the plan.

原句中“to to stop”重复且用法错误，应改为“that stop”引导定语从句，修饰“unexpected tasks”。

× Last year I was a person who like to make lists.

✓ Last year I was a person who liked to make lists.

关系代词“who”指代单数“person”，谓语动词应用第三人称单数过去式“liked”。

× but there are always unexpected things such as my father told tell me to.

✓ but there are always unexpected things such as what my father told me to do.

“told tell me to”结构错误，应为“what my father told me to do”，使用“what”引导宾语从句，且补全动词“do”。

× Well, I prefer to make a list on phone because I think making a list on phone is more convenient and I bring my phone everywhere, so if I have some if if I have some ideas, I just. Write it on my phone.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think making a list on my phone is more convenient and I bring my phone everywhere, so if I have some ideas, I just write it on my phone.

“on phone”缺少所有格，应为“on my phone”。此外，句中有重复“if if”，应去掉多余部分。