Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
No, I, I never make a list when I shop, I show up, I, I, I buy something, follow my heart. So I think shopping is so umm, casual thing. So I don't, I don't want, uh, spend more time on this.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I always make a list before I start working, uh, first I will to ensure what things need I do and to write them, uh and I I will choose right the time for because first.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think the reason is they, uh, sink, uh, make making this is so, uh, terrible And it's, it's a troubles things. They very clear what they need to, so they need them to do it.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer make a list on paper because if I make lists on my maybe I will be extract. I will choose throw my WeChat moment or search some information on social media. So I don't like this so I.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 你的回答中有较多的重复和犹豫词汇,影响了表达的流畅性。建议减少重复,使用更自然的表达方式,并且可以简洁地说明原因。
Example: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. Shopping is a casual activity for me, so I don't want to spend extra time planning.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答结构不完整,语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议先明确回答,再用连词补充具体细节,注意语法和句子完整性。
Example: Yes, I always make a list before I start working to ensure I know what tasks I need to complete. This helps me manage my time effectively and prioritize important work.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答中有较多语法和词汇错误,表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子,清楚表达观点,并用连词连接句子。
Example: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and troublesome. Also, they may be confident enough to remember their tasks without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 回答不完整且表达混乱,缺乏连贯性。建议先明确表达偏好,再说明原因,使用完整句子和恰当的连接词。
Example: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone can be distracting. I might get tempted to check social media or other apps, which interrupts my focus.
× I think the reason is they, uh, sink, uh, make making this is so, uh, terrible And it's, it's a troubles things.
✓ I think the reason is they, uh, think making this is so, uh, terrible and it's, it's a troublesome thing.
这里动词 'make' 后面应该用动名词形式 'making',但原句中 'make making' 是重复错误,应改为 'think making'。此外,'troubles things' 应为 'troublesome thing',形容词形式错误。
× Yes, I always make a list before I start working, uh, first I will to ensure what things need I do and to write them, uh and I I will choose right the time for because first.
✓ Yes, I always make a list before I start working. First, I will ensure what things I need to do and write them, and I will choose the right time because of that.
原句中 'will to ensure' 中 'to' 不应出现,应为 'will ensure'。'what things need I do' 语序错误,应为 'what things I need to do'。'choose right the time for because first' 结构混乱,应调整为 'choose the right time because of that'。
× I prefer make a list on paper because if I make lists on my maybe I will be extract.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because if I make lists on my phone, maybe I will be distracted.
'prefer make' 应为 'prefer to make',动词不定式用法错误。'on my maybe' 不完整,应为 'on my phone'。'be extract' 用词错误,应为 'be distracted'。
× So I don't, I don't want, uh, spend more time on this.
✓ So I don't want to spend more time on this.
原句中 'I don't want, uh, spend' 缺少不定式 'to',正确结构应为 'I don't want to spend'。
× So I will choose throw my WeChat moment or search some information on social media.
✓ So I will choose to throw my WeChat moment or search for some information on social media.
'choose throw' 应为 'choose to throw',动词不定式用法错误。'search some information' 应为 'search for some information',介词使用错误。