List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your sentences concise and correct the word order for better clarity.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go. It helps me save time and avoid buying things I don't need, which also saves money.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but includes filler words and some grammatical mistakes. Try to eliminate fillers like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Absolutely, I make an agenda for my work. It helps me manage my day efficiently, ensuring I complete all my tasks before going home.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and repetitive phrases. Avoid repeating the same idea and use more precise vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: I think some people prefer not to make lists because they can easily remember their tasks. They might be very organized or active, so they don't feel the need to write things down.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing and minor grammatical errors. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repeating the same phrase 'help me to organise my day' twice. Use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly.

Example: I prefer both methods. At work, I use a diary to organize my day, but when shopping, I find it more convenient to use a list on my phone.

× It helps me to purchase the items which I needed rather than wasting the time of purchasing unwanted items and I spent unnecessary the money.

✓ It helps me to purchase the items which I need rather than wasting time purchasing unwanted items and spending unnecessary money.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'needed' (past tense) instead of 'need' (present tense) to match the context. Also, 'the time of purchasing' is awkward; 'wasting time purchasing' is more natural. 'I spent unnecessary the money' is incorrect word order; it should be 'spending unnecessary money'. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement and word order.

× It helps me to purchase the items which I needed rather than wasting the time of purchasing unwanted items and I spent unnecessary the money.

✓ It helps me to purchase the items which I need rather than wasting time purchasing unwanted items and spending unnecessary money.

The phrase 'wasting the time of purchasing' is awkward; 'wasting time purchasing' uses the present participle correctly to indicate ongoing action. Also, 'spending unnecessary money' uses the present participle to parallel the structure.

× So I believe the people, uh, who is so smart and very active, they don't need a list to keep them in track.

✓ So I believe the people, uh, who are so smart and very active, they don't need a list to keep them on track.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'people' (plural), so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, the correct phrase is 'keep them on track' not 'in track'.

× So I believe the people, uh, who is so smart and very active, they don't need a list to keep them in track.

✓ So I believe the people, uh, who are so smart and very active, they don't need a list to keep them on track.

The phrase 'keep them in track' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' as in 'keep them on track' meaning to stay focused or organized.

× But if I am going out for shopping I prefer to use the list on the my phone to help me to organise my day.

✓ But if I am going out shopping, I prefer to use the list on my phone to help me organise my day.

The phrase 'going out for shopping' is better as 'going out shopping'. Also, 'the my phone' is incorrect; only one article is needed, so 'my phone' is correct. Additionally, 'help me to organise' can be simplified to 'help me organise'.