List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and clarify your ideas to avoid confusion, especially about 'impulsive buying' which seems contradictory to making a list. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me go straight to the shelves where the products are. Also, it prevents me from making impulsive purchases of unnecessary items.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats ideas and has some grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain why the list helps you focus on priorities.

Example: Absolutely. I make a to-do list at work because it helps me focus on the most important tasks, ensuring I complete them efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: I think some people avoid making lists because they prefer to organize their tasks mentally and go straight to what they need to do next.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be clearer and more concise. Avoid hesitations and clarify your reasons using linking words for better flow.

Example: I prefer making lists on sticky notes rather than on my phone because it's easier to check them without getting distracted by other apps.

× Definitely. It's one way to monitor what's on my list to directly go to the shelves where the product is displayed and so that I can, uh, have an impulsive buying with other items.

✓ Definitely. It's one way to monitor what's on my list to directly go to the shelves where the product is displayed and so that I can avoid impulsive buying of other items.

The phrase 'have an impulsive buying' is incorrect because 'buying' here should be a noun but is used incorrectly with 'have an'. The correct expression is 'avoid impulsive buying' or 'avoid buying impulsively'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Absolutely. It's important to have A to do list at work so that it will help you focus on the priority in the work that should be prioritized and it's it works. It works all the time because it helps.

✓ Absolutely. It's important to have a to-do list at work so that it will help you focus on the priorities in the work that should be prioritized and it works. It works all the time because it helps.

The phrase 'have A to do list' is incorrect because 'to-do list' is a singular countable noun and requires the indefinite article 'a' in lowercase. Also, 'priority' should be plural 'priorities' to match the context. The repeated 'it's it works' is redundant and corrected to 'it works' for clarity.

× Absolutely. It's important to have A to do list at work so that it will help you focus on the priority in the work that should be prioritized and it's it works. It works all the time because it helps.

✓ Absolutely. It's important to have a to-do list at work so that it will help you focus on the priorities in the work that should be prioritized and it works. It works all the time because it helps.

The word 'priority' should be plural 'priorities' because it refers to multiple tasks that need prioritization. Using the plural form matches the context and improves grammatical correctness.

× I think some people don't make a list because when they have they go directly to the things that they must do and they already organize it through their minds the the next the following works that they should do.

✓ I think some people don't make a list because they go directly to the things that they must do and have already organized in their minds the next tasks that they should do.

The original sentence is confusing and has redundant phrases like 'when they have' and repeated 'the the'. The correction removes unnecessary words and restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to make a list on a sticky note over listing my work over the phone because it helps me easily check and not get distracted when if it is listed on our on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on a sticky note rather than listing my work on the phone because it helps me easily check and not get distracted if it is listed on my phone.

The phrase 'over listing my work over the phone' is awkward and incorrect. 'Rather than' is a better conjunction to express preference. Also, 'on the phone' is the correct preposition. The phrase 'when if it is listed on our on my phone' is corrected to 'if it is listed on my phone' for clarity and correctness.