List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'it's helped' nên là 'it helps' hoặc 'it has helped'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số phần lặp lại không cần thiết. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và chú ý đến thì động từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me stay focused on what I need. With so many brands available, I often feel overwhelmed. Therefore, having a list allows me to make informed decisions and avoid wasting money.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ như 'have this allowed me' không đúng và câu bị lặp từ 'and'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và chú ý đến thì động từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused on my tasks. It keeps me organized and improves my productivity.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều từ ngữ không chính thức và lặp lại như 'umm', 'uh', 'wanna', và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng tiếng lóng và từ ngữ không trang trọng trong bài thi IELTS. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên được hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn để thể hiện ý tưởng mạch lạc.

Example: I'm not sure, but I think some people avoid making lists because it takes time. For small tasks, they prefer to make quick decisions without writing things down.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp như 'as allow me' nên là 'as it allows me'. Bạn nên chú ý đến việc sử dụng đại từ và thì động từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

Example: To be honest, I usually prefer making lists on my smartphone because using a digital app allows me to easily adjust or edit my list whenever I need to. However, I also enjoy crossing things off on paper when I'm done.

× Yes I do, I always make a list before I go shopping because it's helped me stay focused on adding what I need and with so many brands and products available nowadays, I feel confused and overwhelmed.

✓ Yes I do, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay focused on adding what I need and with so many brands and products available nowadays, I feel confused and overwhelmed.

The phrase 'it's helped me' incorrectly uses the past tense 'helped' when the present tense 'helps' is appropriate to describe a habitual action. Use present tense for habitual actions to maintain consistency.

× Therefore, having a list allowed me to do informed decision and without waste money.

✓ Therefore, having a list allows me to make informed decisions and avoid wasting money.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'allowed' should be present tense 'allows' to match the habitual context; 'do informed decision' is incorrect, it should be 'make informed decisions'; 'without waste money' is incorrect, it should be 'avoid wasting money'. Correct sentence structure and verb forms improve clarity.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work because have this allowed me to stay focused on my study and my work and not only have me organized and but also have me improve my productivity.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because this has allowed me to stay focused on my study and my work and not only has it kept me organized but also helped me improve my productivity.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and verb forms: 'have this allowed' should be 'this has allowed'; 'not only have me organized and but also have me improve' is incorrect, it should be 'not only has it kept me organized but also helped me improve'. Proper subject-verb agreement and phrase structure are necessary.

× I'm not sure, but I think one of the more important causes that why people don't wanna make a list before, umm, a task is uh, time consuming.

✓ I'm not sure, but I think one of the more important reasons why people don't want to make a list before a task is that it is time-consuming.

The phrase 'causes that why' is incorrect; 'reasons why' is appropriate. 'Don't wanna' is informal; 'don't want to' is better. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. Modal verb usage is involved in 'don't want to'.

× For example, when they have a small task, they prefer, uh, make decisions quickly without, uh, writing, writing thing down and it's.

✓ For example, when they have a small task, they prefer to make decisions quickly without writing things down.

The sentence is incomplete and has incorrect verb form: 'prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'; 'writing, writing thing down' is repetitive and incorrect, should be 'writing things down'. The sentence should be complete and clear.

× To be honest, I usually prefer making lists on my smartphone because using a digital app is more convenient as allow me to easily adjust or edit my list whenever I need to.

✓ To be honest, I usually prefer making lists on my smartphone because using a digital app is more convenient as it allows me to easily adjust or edit my list whenever I need to.

The phrase 'as allow me' is missing the subject 'it'. Prepositions and subjects must be correctly used to form proper clauses. 'As it allows me' is correct.