List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because if I don't, I might forget important items I need for the next day.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but is affected by hesitation and repetition. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid filler words. Also, use correct plural forms and more precise vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I make a list when I have many tasks to organize my work. Usually, it helps me, but sometimes it doesn't because I cannot manage all my tasks effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but repetitive and lacks clarity. Avoid repeating words and try to explain your ideas more clearly with better vocabulary and sentence structure.

Example: I believe some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their ability to organize their tasks and thoughts freely.

Suggestion: Your answer shows good ideas but is affected by many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently, avoid filler words, and use clearer expressions. Also, use correct verb forms and vocabulary.

Example: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer writing lists on paper to keep track of my tasks, but other times I use my phone because I always carry it with me.

× I think if I don't and make a list I may forgot something that I needed for next day.

✓ I think if I don't make a list I may forget something that I need for the next day.

The verb 'forgot' is the past tense, but here the modal verb 'may' requires the base form 'forget'. Also, 'needed' should be present tense 'need' to match the context of the next day. Additionally, 'don't and make' is incorrect; it should be 'don't make'.

× I should make a list to arrange my works.

✓ I should make a list to arrange my work.

The word 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to tasks or job in general, so 'works' is incorrect here.

× But sometimes, uh, it doesn't work because, umm, I, I can't handle all of my works.

✓ But sometimes, uh, it doesn't work because, umm, I, I can't handle all of my work.

Again, 'work' is uncountable in this context, so 'works' is incorrect.

× I think because they they think if they make a list they cannot arrange their works and they cannot arrange their mind.

✓ I think because they think if they make a list they cannot arrange their work and they cannot arrange their mind.

'Works' should be 'work' as it is uncountable here.

× Sometimes I prefer to make a list on paper and, uh, take every works that I do.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to make a list on paper and, uh, take every task that I do.

The phrase 'take every works' is incorrect. 'Works' is uncountable and 'take every' does not collocate with 'works'. Using 'task' (countable) fits better here.

× Sometimes I prefer to, uh, make it on my phone because I want to, uh, borrow my, uh, phone and because I borrow my phone everywhere.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to, uh, make it on my phone because I want to, uh, bring my, uh, phone and because I carry my phone everywhere.

The verb 'borrow' means to take something temporarily from someone else, which is incorrect here. The correct verbs are 'bring' or 'carry' to indicate having the phone with oneself.