List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by directly stating the reason and adding a supporting detail with linking words.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items. For example, last week I bought everything I needed without any hassle.

Suggestion: Reduce hesitation and repetition to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific examples to support your points.

Example: Yes, I usually make a work list because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss important tasks. For instance, by setting clear goals on my list, I can complete my projects efficiently.

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy, especially subject-verb agreement, and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Provide more specific reasons or examples to enrich your response.

Example: I think it depends on the individual. While I prefer making lists to stay organized, some people dislike them because they prefer to be spontaneous and go with the flow, which suits their lifestyle better.

Suggestion: Avoid redundancy and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct awkward phrasing for a more natural response.

Example: I usually prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Unlike paper lists, which can be bulky to carry around, my phone is always with me, so I can easily access my list anytime.

× Yeah, I usually make a shopping list when I go for shopping because it, uh, makes me to feel organized and so that I cannot miss any required, uh, item and, uh, it.

✓ Yeah, I usually make a shopping list when I go shopping because it, uh, makes me feel organized and so that I cannot miss any required, uh, item and, uh, it.

The phrase 'makes me to feel' is incorrect because after 'make' in causative form, the verb should be in base form without 'to'. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× Yeah, I usually make the list from my work so that, uh, it helps me to be organized and, uh, ensures me that, uh, I, I do not miss any important tasks to do.

✓ Yeah, I usually make the list for my work so that, uh, it helps me to be organized and, uh, ensures me that, uh, I, I do not miss any important tasks to do.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'for' when referring to making a list intended for work.

× But some people doesn't like to make lists, they just wanted to go with the flow, so they do not like making lists.

✓ But some people don't like to make lists, they just want to go with the flow, so they do not like making lists.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'wanted' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'want'.

× If I make a list on a paper, I need to carry that and it will be difficult to carry wherever I go.

✓ If I make a list on paper, I need to carry it and it will be difficult to carry wherever I go.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is unnecessary because 'paper' here is uncountable. Also, 'that' is better replaced with 'it' referring to the list.

× If I make a list in my phone, it will be easy to carry and I can easily access the paper that phone.

✓ If I make a list on my phone, it will be easy to carry and I can easily access the list on my phone.

The preposition should be 'on' not 'in' when referring to using a phone. Also, 'access the paper that phone' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'access the list on my phone'.