List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I find it difficult to remember everything I need. For example, last week I wrote down all the groceries to avoid forgetting anything important.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make lists for work using linking words. Try to be more specific and concise.

Example: Yes, I often make lists for my office tasks because I have a poor memory. This helps me stay organized and ensures I complete all my duties on time.

Suggestion: Your answer is too brief and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear opinion with reasons, using linking words to connect ideas. Try to expand your answer with specific details.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on memory or spontaneous decisions instead.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but repetitive and has grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases. Make your sentences more natural and concise.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient than carrying paper. Since I always have my phone with me, it's easier to update and check my lists anytime.

× Predominantly, I make a list whenever I needed to buy anything.

✓ Predominantly, I make a list whenever I need to buy anything.

The sentence mixes present tense 'make' with past tense 'needed'. Since the action is habitual, the present tense 'need' should be used to maintain consistency.

× Because I'm not, I can't make.

✓ Because I can't, I don't make it.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a clear subject and object. The correction clarifies the meaning by completing the sentence structure.

× I can't memorize anything properly on time.

✓ I can't memorize anything properly on time.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and does not require correction.

× So I made a list whenever I need.

✓ So I make a list whenever I need to.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'made' with present tense 'need'. For habitual actions, present tense 'make' should be used, and 'to' is needed after 'need'.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work and it's the office work for me.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work, and it's office work for me.

The sentence is mostly correct; removing 'the' before 'office work' improves naturalness as 'office work' is uncountable here.

× As a short memory it's some needed to making a list.

✓ Since I have a short memory, it's necessary to make a list.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the verb form.

× I find it hard to remember everything so.

✓ I find it hard to remember everything, so I make a list.

The original sentence ends abruptly. Adding the consequence clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× Maybe they don't want to making list.

✓ Maybe they don't want to make a list.

After 'want to', the base form of the verb 'make' should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× They found it very inconvenient, that's why they don't making list.

✓ They find it very inconvenient; that's why they don't make a list.

The sentence mixes past tense 'found' with present tense 'don't making'. For habitual actions, present tense 'find' and 'don't make' should be used, and 'making' should be 'make'.

× I prefer to make a list on phone because carrying a paper with you is very unusual.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because carrying paper with you is very unusual.

Adding 'my' before 'phone' is more natural. Also, 'carrying paper' is better than 'carrying a paper' since paper is uncountable here.

× We all carrying phone with us, so it's very convenient to carrying a phone with us and making it list on phone.

✓ We all carry phones with us, so it's very convenient to carry a phone and make a list on it.

The verbs 'carrying' and 'making' are incorrectly used; they should be base forms 'carry' and 'make' after modal or auxiliary verbs. Also, plural 'phones' is appropriate, and 'make a list on it' clarifies the object.