List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and correct, and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go grocery shopping because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy. This way, I avoid forgetting items and can shop more efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but has some hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to speak more fluently and structure your sentences better. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I make daily and weekly lists at work because they help me stay organized and ensure I complete all my tasks on time.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. Also, avoid repetition and use linking words to improve flow.

Example: Some people may dislike making lists because it doesn't suit their memory style. They might prefer to remember tasks mentally, which works better for their personality.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains hesitations and some awkward phrasing. Try to speak more smoothly and use clearer expressions. Also, avoid filler words and improve sentence structure.

Example: I prefer making lists on paper because I always carry my diary with me. This helps me stay organized and remember my tasks more easily.

× I usually forgot how many things I buy, I have to buy in grocery.

✓ I usually forget how many things I buy, I have to buy in grocery.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used.

× I usually forgot how many things I buy, I have to buy in grocery.

✓ I usually forget how many things I buy, I have to buy at the grocery store.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to a place like a grocery store. Also, 'grocery' alone is incomplete; it should be 'grocery store'.

× I do make a list every day at my work, like it really helps me to, uh, keep me on track and I'll keep remembering, uh, that I have to do these things and these are on my list.

✓ I do make a list every day at my work; it really helps me to keep on track and remember that I have to do these things and that they are on my list.

The phrase 'keep me on track' is incorrect; 'keep on track' is the correct expression. Also, 'I'll keep remembering' is awkward; 'remember' fits better in present tense for habitual action.

× Even I make, uh, weekly, uh, list also because it works for me and I think I'll I get the thing things correctly.

✓ I even make a weekly list because it works for me, and I think I get things correctly.

The pronoun 'I' is misplaced and redundant. Also, 'thing things' is a repetition error. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× Therefore they, they avoid to make a list because I think every person is different and unique in its own way.

✓ Therefore, they avoid making a list because I think every person is different and unique in their own way.

The verb 'avoid' should be followed by a gerund ('making'), not an infinitive ('to make'). Also, 'its' should be 'their' to agree with the plural subject 'every person' considered individually.

× Every person is different and unique in its own way.

✓ Every person is different and unique in their own way.

The pronoun 'its' is incorrect for referring to 'every person'; 'their' is the appropriate singular gender-neutral pronoun here.

× I think they might be good at remanding things without making list.

✓ I think they might be good at remembering things without making a list.

The word 'remanding' is incorrect; the correct word is 'remembering'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making a list' with the article 'a'.

× I think they might be good at remanding things without making list.

✓ I think they might be good at remembering things without making a list.

The verb 'making' requires an article before 'list'; 'a list' is correct.

× I make a list on my diary and, uh, my diary is always with me.

✓ I make a list in my diary, and my diary is always with me.

The correct preposition for writing inside a diary is 'in', not 'on'.

× So it really keeps me on track and, uh, I'll, I remember to what things to do.

✓ So it really keeps me on track, and I remember what things to do.

The phrase 'I remember to what things to do' is incorrect; it should be 'I remember what things to do'. Also, 'I'll' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow.