List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and structured, starting with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence flow using linking words.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget important items when I just browse. Therefore, before going to the supermarket, I write down all the things I need to buy so I can pick them up one by one efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and repetitive with many filler words. Focus on giving a direct response with clear examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid vague phrases.

Example: Yes, I use lists for my work because they help me remember what to buy, such as daily supplies like paper. This method ensures I don't forget important items.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain reasons logically. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to browse shops casually. They find it more relaxing and easier since they don't have to plan or consider many things in advance.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains many filler words and incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear, concise response with proper sentence structure and linking words to explain your preference effectively.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. I don't need to carry a pen or paper, and I can easily check off items as I pick them up.

× I make a list when I shop because usually just browsing the shopping mall I will forgot something important I have necessary I have to buy.

✓ I make a list when I shop because usually, just browsing the shopping mall, I will forget some important things I need to buy.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match present tense, and 'something important I have necessary I have to buy' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'some important things I need to buy' to correctly express plural objects and proper verb usage.

× I will forgot something important I have necessary I have to buy.

✓ I will forget something important I need to buy.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence context requires future tense 'will forget'. Also, 'have necessary' is incorrect; 'need to buy' is the correct expression.

× So uh before I go to the supermarket I will list the all stuff I should buy and then I just pick it up 1 by 1.

✓ So, before I go to the supermarket, I will list all the stuff I should buy and then I just pick them up one by one.

'the all stuff' is incorrect; the correct order is 'all the stuff'. Also, 'pick it up' should be 'pick them up' because 'stuff' is plural in meaning here.

× I think the list is work because, uh, when I made the list, I will, uh, I will check whether I have to buy it because I'll just for example, like the uh, daily stuff, uh, I have to buy like paper.

✓ I think the list works because, when I make the list, I check whether I have to buy something, for example, daily stuff like paper.

'the list is work' is incorrect; it should be 'the list works' (present tense). 'when I made the list, I will' mixes past and future tenses incorrectly; it should be 'when I make the list, I check' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I guess they may be, uh, light to browsing the the shop and spending the time just more relaxed and more easier than they they to shopping and it's just a browsing and then not need to consider about lots of.

✓ I guess they may prefer to browse the shop and spend time more relaxed and more easily than going shopping; it's just browsing and they don't need to consider many things.

'light to browsing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prefer to browse'. 'more easier' is redundant; use 'easier' or 'more easy'. 'consider about' is incorrect; 'consider' does not require 'about'. Also, 'they they to shopping' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'than going shopping'.

× I will do the list on my phone. Uh, it's convenient as, uh, I didn't need to bring a pen, uh, to, to and, and the paper to the supermarket because, uh, the phone, I can directly to click on it and then, uh, when, when I pick.

✓ I will make the list on my phone. It's convenient because I don't need to bring a pen or paper to the supermarket; I can directly click on it when I pick items.

'do the list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make the list'. 'I didn't need' should be 'I don't need' to match present tense. 'to, to and, and the paper' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'or paper'. 'directly to click on it' should be 'directly click on it'. The sentence is also incomplete and corrected for clarity.