List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly stating that you make a list before shopping to avoid forgetting items. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list before going to the supermarket to ensure I don't forget anything. This helps me pick up items one by one efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'made the list for my walk'. Try to use correct tense and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work because I am an accounting officer with many daily tasks. Therefore, I follow the list step by step to stay organized and complete everything on time.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express the idea that some people dislike lists because they feel restricted or prefer to concentrate without them. Use simpler and clearer sentences.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom or they prefer to focus without following a strict plan.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'made less on form'. Try to clearly state your preference and reasons using correct grammar and linking words.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I don't need to carry paper or pens. Also, it's easy to check off items as I shop.

× I will make a list when I shop for for example when I go to supermarket, uh, before that I will make a list to write down what kind of stuff I have to buy. Is it necessary or what is support me to pick up the stuff 1 by 1 and no forget.

✓ I will make a list when I shop, for example, when I go to the supermarket. Before that, I will make a list to write down what kind of stuff I have to buy. It is necessary and it supports me to pick up the stuff one by one and not forget.

The original sentence had awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms such as 'Is it necessary or what is support me'. The correction uses proper verb forms and clearer sentence structure. 'Is it necessary' is changed to 'It is necessary' to form a correct statement. 'What is support me' is corrected to 'it supports me' to use the correct verb form and subject-verb agreement. Also, 'no forget' is corrected to 'not forget' to use the correct negation form.

× I made the list for my walk because I am a accounting officer.

✓ I made the list for my work because I am an accounting officer.

The word 'walk' is a typo and should be 'work' to make sense in context. Also, 'a accounting officer' is incorrect because 'accounting' starts with a vowel sound, so the article should be 'an' instead of 'a'.

× I have lot of tasks it's uh, I have to do every day.

✓ I have a lot of tasks that I have to do every day.

The phrase 'lot of tasks' is missing the article 'a' before 'lot'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs to be split or connected properly. Adding 'that' clarifies the sentence structure.

× So I need to uh, follow the task 1 by 1 every day.

✓ So I need to follow the tasks one by one every day.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple tasks. Also, '1 by 1' is better expressed as 'one by one' for clarity and formality.

× They may be think about the less is the concentrate their time or, uh, they feel uncomfortable because it's uh, restrict them to uh, exposing them to do a list to organize the old tasks.

✓ They may think that making a list takes away their time or they feel uncomfortable because it restricts them from making a list to organize their old tasks.

The phrase 'may be think' is incorrect; it should be 'may think' to correctly use the modal verb. 'The less is the concentrate their time' is unclear and corrected to 'making a list takes away their time' for clarity. 'It's uh, restrict them' should be 'it restricts them' to agree in number and tense. 'Exposing them to do a list' is incorrect and changed to 'restricts them from making a list' to express the intended meaning.

× I prefer made less on form because I it's necessary, uh, it doesn't need me to bring paper or pens to outside and the phone is very simple for me to, uh, check whether I, uh, pick the stuff.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's necessary. It doesn't require me to bring paper or pens outside, and the phone is very simple for me to check whether I have picked the stuff.

'Prefer made less on form' is incorrect; the verb after 'prefer' should be in the '-ing' form, so 'prefer making lists'. 'On form' is corrected to 'on my phone' to match context. 'It doesn't need me to bring' is incorrect; 'It doesn't require me to bring' is correct. 'To outside' should be 'outside' without 'to'. 'Check whether I, uh, pick the stuff' is corrected to 'check whether I have picked the stuff' to use the present perfect tense, which is appropriate here.