List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains some hesitations and redundancy. Try to be more concise and fluent, avoid filler words like 'uh', and use clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping. First, I write down essential items like milk and vegetables, then I pick them up one by one to stay organized.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Also, explain why the list is useful with specific reasons and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work because I am an accountant. Since I have many daily tasks, the list helps me organize and complete them one by one efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words to connect your points. Also, provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time to plan. Instead, they prefer to browse freely and relax while shopping without restrictions.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammar errors and unclear expressions. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentences. Also, explain your preference with specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it helps me organize tasks by priority. Moreover, it saves time and I don't need to carry paper and pen when I go out.

× I will make a list when I shop, just like I go to shopping mall.

✓ I will make a list when I shop, just like I go to the shopping mall.

The phrase 'go to shopping mall' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'shopping mall'. This is an article error (ID 22). Adding 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× I will, uh, make the list 1st and then I will, uh, write down like the milk or vegetable, something like that, that they are neat and then I will pick it up 1 by 1.

✓ I will, uh, make the list first and then I will, uh, write down things like milk or vegetables, something like that, that are neat and then I will pick them up one by one.

The original sentence has several issues: '1st' should be spelled out as 'first' for formality; 'like the milk or vegetable' is incorrect because 'milk' is uncountable and 'vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables'; 'that they are neat' is awkward and unclear, better to say 'that are neat'; 'pick it up 1 by 1' should be 'pick them up one by one' to agree with plural items. These corrections address quantifier use (ID 14), singular/plural issues (ID 1), and clarity.

× I make a list for my work and I think it's useful because I am a accountant.

✓ I make a list for my work and I think it's useful because I am an accountant.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before a word starting with a vowel sound ('accountant'). The correct article is 'an'. This is an article error (ID 22).

× Uh, I have lots of Daily Star, uh, daily talk is the, uh, need to do everyday and uh, it's the organize me to follow.

✓ Uh, I have lots of daily tasks, things I need to do every day, and it helps organize me to follow them.

The phrase 'Daily Star' seems incorrect; likely intended 'daily tasks'. 'Daily talk is the, uh, need to do everyday' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Everyday' should be two words 'every day' when meaning each day. 'It's the organize me to follow' is incorrect; better phrased as 'it helps organize me to follow them'. These corrections address incorrect adjective use (ID 13) and sentence structure errors (ID 26).

× I think they maybe think about the less spending their time to consider about, uh, what I have to buy because they think, uh, or, or or or what they need to do.

✓ I think maybe they think about spending less time considering what they have to buy or what they need to do.

The original sentence has pronoun inconsistency and awkward phrasing: 'the less spending their time' is incorrect; 'less spending time' should be 'spending less time'. 'Consider about' is incorrect; 'consider' does not require 'about'. Also, 'what I have to buy' should be 'what they have to buy' to maintain pronoun consistency. These are incorrect pronoun use (ID 12) and incorrect preposition use (ID 11).

× Just like the shopping mall, maybe they just browsing and relax.

✓ Just like at the shopping mall, maybe they just browse and relax.

The phrase 'Just like the shopping mall' is incomplete; it should be 'Just like at the shopping mall' to indicate location. Also, 'they just browsing' is incorrect verb form; it should be 'they just browse'. This addresses article use (ID 17) and verb tense (ID 6).

× I prefer made a list on phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to make', not the past tense 'made'. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' for clarity. This is a past tense issue (ID 5) and incorrect preposition use (ID 11).

× So in the phone we are, I, I can, uh, chat where, uh, which time I have to do first and then it's the, uh, save my time and I don't have to, uh, bring my paint and paper, go to outside or, uh.

✓ So on the phone, I can chat about which tasks I have to do first, and it saves me time so I don't have to bring my pen and paper when I go outside.

'In the phone' should be 'on the phone' (preposition error, ID 11). 'We are, I, I can, uh, chat where' is unclear and ungrammatical; corrected to 'I can chat about which tasks'. 'It's the, uh, save my time' is incorrect; corrected to 'it saves me time'. 'Bring my paint and paper' should be 'bring my pen and paper'. 'Go to outside' is incorrect; corrected to 'go outside'. These corrections address pronoun use (ID 12), preposition use (ID 11), and sentence structure (ID 26).