Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
No, I hardly ever make a list when I shop. The reason is that I can remember everything that I want to buy, so it is not necessary for me to make a list.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I frequently make list when I'm studying. However, I think it doesn't works because there are many things that can distract me. So every time the list that I make doesn't work.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I guess the reason is that making lists can lead to anxiety disorders. For example, some people make this when they are working or studying. However, there are many distractions so they can't focus on the things they.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Instead of making a list on paper, I prefer record the lists in my.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答较为自然且直接,但表达稍显重复,且缺少连接词使得句子衔接不够流畅。建议减少重复表达,使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Example: No, I hardly ever make a list when I shop because I can remember everything I want to buy, so it is unnecessary for me to write one.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误(如单复数和动词形式),且表达重复,缺少具体细节。建议注意语法正确性,避免重复,并提供具体例子说明分心的原因。
Example: Yes, I often make lists when I study; however, they don't always work because I get distracted by my phone or noise around me.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答内容不够准确且表达不完整,逻辑不清晰。建议明确表达观点,补充完整句子,并用具体例子支持观点。
Example: Some people don't like making lists because it can make them feel anxious, especially if they have too many tasks and get distracted easily.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答不完整且语法错误,缺少具体信息。建议完整表达偏好,注意语法,并说明原因。
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient and I can easily edit them.
× Yes, I frequently make list when I'm studying.
✓ Yes, I frequently make lists when I'm studying.
这里的名词list是可数名词,表示“清单”,因为频率副词frequently暗示多次行为,所以应使用复数形式lists。
× However, I think it doesn't works because there are many things that can distract me.
✓ However, I think it doesn't work because there are many things that can distract me.
助动词does后面动词应使用原形work,不能加s。这里的doesn't是第三人称单数否定形式,后面动词保持原形。
× So every time the list that I make doesn't work.
✓ So every time the lists that I make don't work.
前文提到多次制作清单,且every time表示多次情况,list应使用复数lists,且主语复数时谓语动词用don't。
× For example, some people make this when they are working or studying.
✓ For example, some people make these when they are working or studying.
代词this指示单数,前文指代复数的lists,应使用these。
× However, there are many distractions so they can't focus on the things they.
✓ However, there are many distractions so they can't focus on the things they need to focus on.
句子不完整,缺少谓语部分,导致意思不明确。应补充完整谓语,使句子结构完整。
× Instead of making a list on paper, I prefer record the lists in my.
✓ Instead of making a list on paper, I prefer to record the lists on my phone.
动词prefer后接动词不定式to record,且句子缺少宾语“phone”,导致句子不完整。应补充完整。