List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct tense and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep the answer concise.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me buy everything quickly without hesitation in the store.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks proper sentence structure and has grammatical mistakes. Use complete sentences and clarify your points with linking words. Also, explain why it fails with more detail.

Example: I usually make a to-do list before starting my tasks because it helps me understand how many tasks I need to complete. However, it doesn't always work well because I struggle with managing my time effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains awkward expressions. Avoid vague phrases like 'in their eyes' and filler words like 'Umm'. Provide clearer reasons and examples.

Example: I think some people dislike making lists because it makes them feel stressed. Instead, they prefer to memorize their tasks mentally, which they find more flexible.

Suggestion: Your answer has some hesitation and unclear phrasing. Try to speak more fluently and use clearer linking words. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Example: I prefer making lists on paper at my desk because I can see them easily while working on my laptop. Using my phone is less convenient since I have to unlock it and open the list each time.

× Yes, I make a shopping list when I shop because I can grab my stuff quickly while hesitates in front of the shops.

✓ Yes, I make a shopping list when I shop because I can grab my stuff quickly while hesitating in front of the shops.

The verb 'hesitates' should be in the '-ing' form 'hesitating' after 'while' to indicate an action happening simultaneously. Using 'hesitates' is incorrect because 'while' requires the verb to be in the present participle form.

× Make A to do list before I starting to do my tasks because it helped me realize how many tests I need to finish today.

✓ I make a to-do list before I start to do my tasks because it helps me realize how many tasks I need to finish today.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect verb forms. 'Make' should be 'I make' to include the subject. 'Starting' should be 'start' to match the present tense. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Tests' is likely a typo for 'tasks'.

× However, it always failed because of my time management.

✓ However, it always fails because of my time management.

The adverb 'always' indicates a habitual action, so the verb should be in the present tense 'fails' instead of past tense 'failed'.

× I think that some people don't like to make this because those tasks make them feel stressed.

✓ I think that some people don't like to make lists because those tasks make them feel stressed.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used to refer to 'lists'. It should be replaced with the noun 'lists' for clarity and correctness.

× Instead of making this, they memorize those assignments in their eyes which can help them Umm.

✓ Instead of making lists, they memorize those assignments in their minds which can help them.

The phrase 'in their eyes' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in their minds' to indicate memorization. Also, 'this' should be replaced with 'lists' for clarity.

× I prefer to make a list in front of my desk on paper because I can see it directly when I just, uh, stay on my laptop.

✓ I prefer to make a list at my desk on paper because I can see it directly when I just, uh, stay on my laptop.

The preposition 'in front of my desk' is incorrect here; 'at my desk' is the correct preposition to indicate location. 'On paper' is correct.

× However, if I make this on my phone, I need to open my phone and check them.

✓ However, if I make a list on my phone, I need to open my phone and check it.

The pronoun 'this' should be replaced with 'a list' for clarity. Also, 'them' is plural but 'list' is singular, so 'it' should be used instead.