List— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, I always make a list for items I have to buy in advance because I'm forgetful and would make mistakes. But I also buy many attractive products which are not in my plan.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, during my previous internship, my mentor tended to ask me to do several things, so I was used to write them down in case of forgetting it contributes to my work.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
This thing is a waste of time because they prefer to spend the same time on working. Additionally, their confidence on their memory. They can remember everything without making lists.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Definitely on my phone. I think it's more convenient for me to adapt items as I couldn't live without my phone and if I forget something I can check on my phone at any time.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答时应避免重复表达，且句子结构需更自然流畅。例如，'I always make a shopping list in advance because I tend to forget things, but sometimes I also buy unplanned attractive items.'
Example: I usually prepare a shopping list beforehand to avoid forgetting anything, but occasionally I purchase some appealing items that aren't on my list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 句子结构不够清晰，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词并调整语序，使表达更自然。
Example: During my previous internship, my mentor often assigned me multiple tasks, so I got used to writing them down to avoid forgetting and to improve my work efficiency.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 表达不够准确，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子并明确表达原因。
Example: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time and they are confident in their memory, so they think they can remember everything without writing it down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中应避免语法错误，句子应更简洁自然。建议调整表达，使其更流畅。
Example: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient to add or remove items, and I can check it anytime since I always have my phone with me.
Grammar
× so I was used to write them down in case of forgetting it contributes to my work.
✓ so I was used to writing them down in case of forgetting, which would affect my work.
动词短语“used to”后面应接动名词形式，因此“write”应改为“writing”。此外，句子结构不完整，需补充连接词和调整表达，使句意更清晰。
× This thing is a waste of time because they prefer to spend the same time on working.
✓ This is a waste of time because they prefer to spend the same time working.
句子中“prefer to spend the same time on working”结构不正确，介词“on”不应与动名词“working”连用，且“this thing”表达不自然，应简化为“This”。
× Additionally, their confidence on their memory.
✓ Additionally, they are confident in their memory.
原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。应补充动词“are confident”，并将介词“on”改为“in”，符合习惯用法。
× I think it's more convenient for me to adapt items as I couldn't live without my phone and if I forget something I can check on my phone at any time.
✓ I think it's more convenient for me to add items as I couldn't live without my phone, and if I forget something, I can check on my phone at any time.
动词“adapt”用错，应为“add”，表示“添加”。此外，句中缺少逗号，影响句子流畅。
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