ListPart 1 Report

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Part 1

Examiner

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidate

Well, when I go to shop I just buy some buy a few things so I don't need to take a list with me. But if I have some task and need to bring some people to my homemades or counties, I may take a list to remember the things and.

Examiner

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidate

Yes, I make excel list on my computer and help to remember the every detail of my task and it's very helpful because most of my job is long time so it's difficult to remember. Do you have that in your?

Examiner

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidate

Well, I think because the job is quite easy and repetitive, so they didn't need to at least remember the details and making a list is a waste of time.

Examiner

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidate

What I will more prefer to make a list on my smartphone because they have many useful applications to help me and remind me the every details which I have put in it and in addition I carry my phones almost every day.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 5.5Fluency & Coherence: 5.5Pronunciation: 6.0Grammar: 5.5Lexical Resource: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Score: 60.0

Suggestion: 用更自然且简洁的句子直接回答问题,避免重复与语法错误;若提供补充信息,使用连接词并具体说明何种情况下会列清单(例如人数、场合或物品种类)。控制在最多五句内。

Example: Usually I don't make a shopping list when I buy just a few items because I can remember them. However, if I am shopping for a party or taking others with me, I make a list to ensure I don't forget anything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Score: 65.0

Suggestion: 回答时注意语法和词序,说明具体如何使用清单(例如列出任务、设定截止日期、优先级),并用连词使结构连贯;避免把问题反问考官。

Example: Yes, I keep an Excel checklist on my computer to track every task. I list each task with deadlines and priorities, which helps me manage long-term projects and avoid missing details.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Score: 70.0

Suggestion: 用更清晰的原因并给出具体例子或对比,注意时态和主谓一致,使用连接词扩展观点但保持简洁。

Example: I think some people avoid lists because their tasks are simple and routine, so they rely on habit. For example, a cashier who repeats the same actions daily may find lists unnecessary and time-consuming.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Score: 68.0

Suggestion: 直接表明偏好并说明具体原因,使用连词组织理由(例如方便、提醒功能、同步功能),注意代词与单复数一致,句子简练。

Example: I prefer making lists on my smartphone because apps can set reminders and sync across devices. Also, I carry my phone every day, so digital lists are more convenient than paper.

Grammar

Verb in the present participle form

× Well, when I go to shop I just buy some buy a few things so I don't need to take a list with me.

Well, when I go shopping I just buy a few things so I don't need to take a list with me.

句中“go to shop”用法不自然,應使用“go shopping”(動名詞短語表示去做購物這個活動)。另外有重複的“buy”。建議把“go to shop”改為“go shopping”,並刪掉重複詞。

Sentence structure errors

× But if I have some task and need to bring some people to my homemades or counties, I may take a list to remember the things and.

But if I have some tasks and need to take some people to my home or to other places, I may take a list to remember the things.

句子結構混亂,多處詞彙用錯。原句中“homemades or counties”不合適,應為“home”或“other places”;“some task”應為複數“some tasks”或“a task”;“bring some people to my home”語義應是“take some people to my home”或“bring”視情境,但整句需重組。最後的連詞“and.”多餘。建議理清要表達的意思,使用正確名詞並調整數量形式。

Article errors

× Yes, I make excel list on my computer and help to remember the every detail of my task and it's very helpful because most of my job is long time so it's difficult to remember.

Yes, I make an Excel list on my computer to help me remember every detail of my tasks, and it's very helpful because most of my work lasts a long time so it's difficult to remember everything.

需要不定冠詞“an”修飾“Excel list”;“help to remember the every detail”語序錯誤,應為“help me remember every detail”;“task”視為泛指應用複數“tasks”;“most of my job is long time”不自然,改為“most of my work lasts a long time”;並補充“everything”使語義完整。建議學習冠詞用法和常用搭配(help someone do sth, remember every detail, last a long time)。

Sentence structure errors

× Do you have that in your?

Do you have that too?

原句“Do you have that in your?”不完整且缺少名詞,語法錯誤。根據語境,應使用簡短問句“Do you have that too?”表示對方是否也有同樣的情況。建議練習完整問句結構並注意代詞或副詞的使用。

Past tense issue

× Well, I think because the job is quite easy and repetitive, so they didn't need to at least remember the details and making a list is a waste of time.

Well, I think because the job is quite easy and repetitive, they don't need to remember the details, and making a list is a waste of time.

前半句使用現在時描述普遍情況,卻用了過去式“didn't need”,時態不一致。應使用一般現在時“don't need”。另外“at least”位置不當,刪除以保持句意清晰。建議注意陳述普遍事實時使用現在時,並檢查副詞位置。

Verb in the present participle form

× What I will more prefer to make a list on my smartphone because they have many useful applications to help me and remind me the every details which I have put in it and in addition I carry my phones almost every day.

I prefer to make a list on my smartphone because it has many useful applications to help me and remind me of every detail I have put in it, and in addition I carry my phone almost every day.

“What I will more prefer”語序與用法錯誤,應簡化為“I prefer”。“they have”指代不當,應指單數“it”或“my smartphone”;“remind me the every details”語序錯誤,應為“remind me of every detail”;“phones”應為單數“phone”與“my”。建議學習主語一致、固定搭配(remind sb of sth)和簡潔語序。

Vocabulary

DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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