Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, I do. I often think about what I'm going to buy before I go out for shopping. The reason why the list is because the I can prevent myself from buying things which I don't need.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I make a list for my work before like starting the day, at least what I'm going to do today. So like whenever I finish one task I can. Delete it and I.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think the reason why people don't make a list is because that they probably want to maintain some space for what they are going to do or what will be happened suddenly to keep the.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer to make a list on my phone since that nowadays cell phone are. Easy to access and like every moment I hold myself which can remind me what the work I haven't done yet so.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but tighten the structure and fix small grammar issues. Start with a concise topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition (e.g., "the list is because the"). Pay attention to article use and word order ("prevent myself from buying unnecessary things").
Example: Yes — I always make a shopping list. Because I plan ahead, I can avoid impulse buys and save money, especially on grocery trips.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 66.0Suggestion: Good idea, but make the response more fluent and complete. Use one clear topic sentence and one supporting detail explaining how it helps you. Avoid filler words like "like" and finish sentences fully. Use a linking word (e.g., "so" or "therefore") correctly.
Example: Yes, I make a to-do list at the start of each workday. This helps me keep track of tasks, and when I complete an item I delete it, which motivates me to stay productive.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Your idea is acceptable but the sentence is unfinished and awkward. Give a clear topic sentence about reasons, then add one specific explanation with correct phrasing and linking words. Use expressions like "prefer flexibility" or "avoid planning" and finish the thought.
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer flexibility; for example, they want to keep time free for unexpected events rather than follow a strict schedule.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 64.0Suggestion: Clear preference, but improve grammar and fluency. State your choice in a concise topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid unnecessary words and correct subject-verb agreement ("phones are").
Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me and easy to update, so I can quickly check what tasks I still need to do.
× I often think about what I'm going to buy before I go out for shopping.
✓ I often think about what I'm going to buy before I go out shopping.
Using 'go out for shopping' is unnatural; the correct phrase is 'go out shopping' or 'go shopping'. Keep present simple 'I often think' as is; change prepositional phrase for natural English. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6)
× The reason why the list is because the I can prevent myself from buying things which I don't need.
✓ The reason I make a list is that I can prevent myself from buying things I don't need.
Unnecessary words and wrong structure: 'The reason why the list is because the' is ungrammatical. Use 'The reason I make a list is that...' or 'I make a list because...'. Also remove extra article 'the' before 'I'. Use relative clause 'things I don't need' instead of 'which'. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)
× Yes, I make a list for my work before like starting the day, at least what I'm going to do today.
✓ Yes, I make a list for my work before starting the day, at least of what I'm going to do today.
Unnecessary filler 'like' should be removed. Use 'before starting the day' (gerund) and 'a list of what I'm going to do today' or 'at least of what I'm going to do today' for clarity. Maintain present simple for routine. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6)
× So like whenever I finish one task I can. Delete it and I.
✓ So whenever I finish one task, I can delete it.
The sentence is fragmented and contains fillers. Combine clauses into one clear sentence: 'So whenever I finish one task, I can delete it.' Remove the extra 'and I.' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)
× I think the reason why people don't make a list is because that they probably want to maintain some space for what they are going to do or what will be happened suddenly to keep the.
✓ I think the reason people don't make a list is that they probably want to leave some flexibility for things that come up unexpectedly.
Multiple problems: unnecessary 'why' with 'reason', incorrect use of 'because that', awkward phrase 'maintain some space', wrong passive 'will be happened', and sentence cut off at the end. Use 'leave some flexibility' and 'things that come up unexpectedly' for natural expression. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)
× I prefer to make a list on my phone since that nowadays cell phone are.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone since nowadays cell phones are
Agreement and word order: 'cell phone are' should be plural 'cell phones are'. Remove 'that' after 'since' when giving a reason ('since nowadays...'). Keep present simple 'I prefer'. Note: this sentence still needs completion (see next). (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6)
× Easy to access and like every moment I hold myself which can remind me what the work I haven't done yet so.
✓ easy to access, and they can remind me at any moment about work I haven't done yet.
Fragmented clause; incorrect pronoun reference and word order: 'every moment I hold myself' is unclear. Connect to previous clause: 'cell phones are easy to access, and they can remind me at any moment about work I haven't done yet.' Use 'they' to refer to 'cell phones' and correct noun phrase 'work I haven't done yet.' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)