Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, I like make a list before shop, for example people and go to the supermarket, I will list, I will make a list because Larry is not very good. I I always forget, forgot what should I buy?
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes of course I like make list before I work because in my major there are lots of assignments so I always forgot the timeline. I think the make the list will make me clear to know the time and make the.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Oh I think some people avoid making this because they feel really sick or to flexible and they know they need to deal in each day so they don't need to write down and they probably don't want the list to limited herself to do.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Uh, I think I like make a list in my phone because, uh, I sometimes forgot to take the paper and I will, uh, and the friend I take it everywhere so I can, umm, check the list at any time.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 52.0Suggestion: 回答要更简洁、语法正确并直接回应问题。先给出主题句(如“Yes, I always make a shopping list.”),然后用一到两句具体说明原因和例子。注意时态与代词用法,避免重复和口头填充词。可以用连接词(because, so, for example)使句子连贯。
Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list. I do this because I often forget items, so writing them down helps me remember everything. For example, before I go to the supermarket I list groceries and household items to save time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 56.0Suggestion: 回答要完整并逻辑清晰。先给出直接回答,然后解释原因并说明效果。注意时态、冠词和句子结尾要完整。用连接词(because, so, therefore)增强逻辑。避免不完整句和重复词。
Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work because my major involves many assignments with different deadlines. Making a list helps me track timelines and prioritize tasks, so I can finish work on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 48.0Suggestion: 表达要更准确并使用合适词汇。先直接回答问题(Some people don't like lists because...),然后给两三个清晰原因并举例。修正词汇搭配错误(比如 'feel really sick' 应为 'find it annoying' 或 'feel restricted'),注意主谓一致与代词指代。
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find them restrictive or unnecessary. For instance, people with flexible schedules may prefer to decide tasks spontaneously, and others feel lists are annoying or stressful.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答应更流利且去掉口头语。给出明确偏好并解释原因,使用连贯词(because, so, therefore)连接理由。注意词序与词形(e.g. 'I take it everywhere' 而不是 'the friend I take it everywhere')。保持句子在五句以内。
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have my phone with me, so I can check the list anytime. It's more convenient than paper, which I might forget to bring.
× Yes, I like make a list before shop, for example people and go to the supermarket, I will list, I will make a list because Larry is not very good. I I always forget, forgot what should I buy?
✓ Yes, I like making a list before I shop. For example, when people go to the supermarket, I make a list because Larry is not very good. I always forget what I should buy.
句中多处动词形式错误。根据句意,动词“like”后需跟动名词“making”(Grammar Problem Type 10 类似,但列表中“Verb in the present participle form”为10),此外“before shop”缺主语和动词时态,正确为“before I shop”。“for example people and go to the supermarket”应为“for example, when people go to the supermarket”以表达原因和条件。从句“I I always forget, forgot what should I buy?”中不应混用现在时和过去时,应使用现在时“I always forget what I should buy.” 建议:学会在like后使用动名词,注意完成从句的主语和正确的动词时态,避免同时使用重复或冲突的时态。
× Yes of course I like make list before I work because in my major there are lots of assignments so I always forgot the timeline. I think the make the list will make me clear to know the time and make the.
✓ Yes, of course I like making a list before I work because in my major there are lots of assignments, so I always forget the deadlines. I think making a list will help me clearly know the schedule.
句中“like make list”应改为“like making a list”(动名词形式)。“I always forgot the timeline”时态不一致,应使用现在时“forget”并且用更自然的名词“deadlines”。“the make the list will make me clear to know the time and make the.”结构混乱,需改为“making a list will help me clearly know the schedule”以使语义完整且语法正确。建议:注意like后接动名词,区分现在时与过去时,用恰当名词表达“截止时间/时间表”,并确保句子成分完整。
× Oh I think some people avoid making this because they feel really sick or to flexible and they know they need to deal in each day so they don't need to write down and they probably don't want the list to limited herself to do.
✓ Oh, I think some people avoid making lists because they feel it is too restrictive or they know they need to handle things each day so they don't need to write them down, and they probably don't want a list to limit them.
原句中“avoid making this”中的“this”不清晰,应改为复数“lists”。“feel really sick or to flexible”语义和形式错误,应为“feel it is too restrictive”或“too inflexible”。“they need to deal in each day”应为“handle things each day”。最后“the list to limited herself to do”存在语法和代词错误,正确用法为“a list to limit them”。问题包括动名词使用、不正确的形容词/副词形式、代词使用和句子结构混乱。建议:注意名词复数和代词一致性,形容词与副词的正确形式(too + 形容词),以及避免直接翻译导致的结构错误。
× Uh, I think I like make a list in my phone because, uh, I sometimes forgot to take the paper and I will, uh, and the friend I take it everywhere so I can, umm, check the list at any time.
✓ Uh, I think I like making a list on my phone because I sometimes forget to take paper lists and my phone I take everywhere so I can check the list at any time.
“like make a list”应为“like making a list”。“in my phone”更自然为“on my phone”。“I sometimes forgot”时态错误,应为现在时“forget”。“the friend I take it everywhere”语义错误,应为“my phone I take everywhere”。句子中存在动名词、介词、时态和代词用法问题。建议:使用like后接动名词,注意介词搭配(on the phone),使用正确时态并确保代词指代清晰。