List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I always make a shopping list.), then give one or two specific reasons or details using linking words (because, so). Avoid repetition and correct verb forms and articles.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list. I often forget things quickly, so I note items immediately on my phone or on paper. This helps me shop faster and avoid buying unnecessary items.

Suggestion: Provide a direct answer, then one clear supporting detail with correct grammar. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) to connect ideas. Be specific about how lists help (e.g., prioritizing tasks, tracking progress). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I always make a list for work because it helps me prioritize tasks. For example, I write down my top three tasks for the day so I can focus on completing them first and track my progress.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear reason, then support with a concise explanation or example. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct sentence structure. Avoid vague phrases and repetitions.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find them time-consuming. For example, busy people may prefer to remember things mentally rather than spending time writing everything down.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference sentence first, then one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so). Correct grammar (use articles, remove repeated words), and be concise.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me and easier to edit. Paper lists were useful before, but now my phone reminders help me keep everything organised.

× Yes, I practice it and actually I got forget everything in a very short time.

✓ Yes, I practice it and actually I forget everything in a very short time.

The phrase 'got forget' is incorrect. English uses the simple present 'forget' to describe habitual actions or general truths. Use 'forget' instead of 'got forget' which is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'I forget' for repeated occurrences.

× That's why when I think if a things that I need to buy it then as soon as possible I list it in a paper or either in a paper or in my phone and when I go to the market easily I can.

✓ That's why when I think of the things that I need to buy, I list them on paper or in my phone as soon as possible so I can easily find them when I go to the market.

Multiple errors: 'a things' mixes singular article with plural noun — use 'the things' or 'things'. 'Think if' should be 'think of'. 'List it' should match plural 'things' so use 'list them'. Use 'on paper' not 'in a paper'. Also sentence structure was disordered; reorganized to be clear and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I always make at least when I go for work and really it's it works because when I plan for a day then I have think that's in a day I have complete those types of works and when I list it out in a paper and.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go to work and it really works because when I plan my day I know which tasks I need to complete, and I write them down on paper.

Original sentence has incomplete and misplaced phrases and redundancy ('it's it works'). 'Make at least' is unclear; changed to 'make a list'. 'Plan for a day' should be 'plan my day'. 'Have think that's in a day I have complete those types of works' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'know which tasks I need to complete'. Also 'list it out in a paper' -> 'write them down on paper'. Restructured for clarity.

× It depends on the person to person.

✓ It depends from person to person.

The idiomatic expression is 'from person to person' or 'from one person to another'. 'Depends on the person to person' is not correct prepositional usage. Use 'from' to show variation between individuals.

× Some people think that making a miss making a list is just most of the time, but they don't realize that how a simple task may can easier the whole desk plan whole.

✓ Some people think that making a list is a waste of time, but they don't realize how a simple task can make planning much easier.

This sentence contains several problems: 'making a miss making a list' is nonsense — likely intended 'making a list is a waste of time'. 'Most of the time' misused; replaced with 'a waste of time'. 'May can' is a redundant modal combination — use 'can'. 'Easier the whole desk plan whole' is ungrammatical; revised to 'make planning much easier'. Reworded for clarity and correct word choice.

× I used to list my works in a paper, but now I I list in a phone because I think it's very easier all the time.

✓ I used to list my tasks on paper, but now I list them on my phone because I think it's much easier.

'Used to' is correct to describe past habit, but 'list my works in a paper' is incorrect: use 'list my tasks on paper'. 'List in a phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'Very easier' is nonstandard; use 'much easier'. Also remove duplicate 'I' and use plural 'them' to refer to 'tasks'.

× The paper is not available besides me, but phone is available all the time in my hand That's.

✓ Paper is not always with me, but my phone is available all the time in my hand.

'Not available besides me' is incorrect preposition use; use 'not always with me'. 'Phone is available' needs a determiner 'my phone'. 'In my hand' is acceptable though 'in my hand' or 'in my pocket' depending on meaning. Removed dangling 'That's' and smoothed the sentence.