List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer and more natural: correct grammar, remove filler words, and use a concise topic sentence plus one or two specific reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and precise vocabulary (items, budget). Keep it under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me stick to my budget and avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, I write down ingredients I need for the week and tick them off as I find them, so I save time and money.

Suggestion: Improve fluency and reduce repetition: start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific example of how lists help (prioritising tasks, deadlines). Use linking words (so, therefore) and avoid repeating words.

Example: Yes, I keep a work to-do list and it works well. It helps me prioritise tasks and remember deadlines, so I can focus on the most important jobs each day.

Suggestion: Give a direct hypothesis with clear reasons and a linking word: start with a concise statement (e.g. Some people dislike lists because...), then explain 1–2 specific reasons (find it restrictive, time-consuming, prefer memory). Avoid unclear comparisons and grammatical errors.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find the process time-consuming or too restrictive. They may prefer relying on memory or flexibility, especially if their plans change frequently.

Suggestion: Be decisive and give clear, specific reasons for each option; avoid unclear fragments. Begin with a direct preference (or say you use both), then give concrete examples when you use paper vs phone and use linking words (for example, when, because). Keep it coherent and under five sentences.

Example: I use both paper and my phone for lists. For quick notes or meal plans I prefer paper because it’s faster, but for shopping or work tasks I use my phone since it’s easy to edit and carry with me.

× Yes, I always make a loose to make this before I go to the shop and and go for shopping because it is helpful for me to avoid wasting money and focusing my pubs.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me avoid wasting money and focus on my purchases.

Multiple issues: incorrect word 'loose' instead of 'list' (word choice), repeated word 'and and', awkward phrase 'go for shopping' (should be 'go shopping'), and 'focusing my pubs' is incorrect—likely intended 'focus on my purchases'. This is a sentence structure and word choice problem; simplify clauses, remove repetition, use correct vocabulary, and use infinitive/gerund forms correctly (e.g., 'helps me avoid' and 'focus on').

× Yes, I make a list for my work and it it actually does work and because it is helpful for me to to clarify what I have to do today or tomorrow.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and it actually does work because it helps me clarify what I have to do today or tomorrow.

Errors include repeated words 'it it' and 'to to', unnecessary 'and' before 'because', and wordy phrasing. Remove duplicates and the extra 'and', and use 'helps me clarify' for natural phrasing. This fixes sentence structure and redundancy.

× I'm not sure because I like the person who likes to make a list, but I guess the people who don't like make a list don't want don't waste of time by making a list.

✓ I'm not sure because I like people who make lists, but I guess those who don't like making lists don't want to waste time doing so.

Problems: awkward pronoun phrases ('the person who likes' → 'people who make lists'), incorrect verb form 'don't like make' (should be 'don't like making'), extra 'don't' and incorrect 'waste of time' instead of 'waste time'. This is primarily pronoun and verb form misuse; use 'those' to refer to people and gerund 'making' after 'like'.

× I can't choose because I always make a list in both of them. I usually make a list on paper of fast and why I'm on working. I use my.

✓ I can't choose because I always make lists on both. I usually write quick lists on paper when I'm working. I also use my phone.

Multiple errors: 'both of them' needs context—'on both' (on both paper and phone). 'Make a list on paper of fast and why I'm on working' is ungrammatical—likely intended 'write quick lists on paper when I'm working'. Sentence fragment 'I use my.' is incomplete; complete it as 'I also use my phone.' These are pronoun and sentence structure errors; clarify referents and complete sentences.