List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatical, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and give one brief reason or example using a linking phrase. Avoid redundancy and keep to under five sentences.

Example: No, I don't usually make a shopping list. Instead, I decide what to buy on the spot because I prefer to be flexible. For example, if I see a special offer I will buy it even if I didn't plan to.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence stating whether you make work lists, then explain briefly why they do or do not work using linking words (however, because). Use correct sentence structure and be specific about the problem and a benefit.

Example: Yes, I do make lists for work, but they don't always work well. However, because I struggle with organizing tasks, I often fail to follow the list. Still, the list helps me remember deadlines and what needs to be done next.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly: explain reasons why some people dislike lists. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and specific reasons (feel restricted, forget, prefer flexibility). Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and prefer spontaneity. For example, they might worry a list will limit their choices, or they may find planning stressful, so they avoid lists entirely.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear preference sentence, then give one or two specific benefits using linking words (for example, because, such as). Correct grammar (it can -> it can) and keep it concise.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it can send reminders before deadlines. For example, my phone notifies me an hour before an appointment, which helps me stay on schedule.

× I love to looking aloud if I have an item I need to buy.

✓ I love looking aloud when I have an item I need to buy.

The verb pattern 'love' can be followed by the gerund (verb+ing) or an infinitive, but not 'to' plus gerund. Use 'love looking' or 'love to look'. Also 'if' is less appropriate than 'when' for a habitual action; use 'when' to show it happens whenever the condition occurs.

× I just decide right now.

✓ I just decide right away.

The adverb 'right now' usually indicates present continuous for immediate actions; however the speaker means 'immediately' or 'at that moment' in a habitual sense, so 'right away' fits better with simple present 'decide'. If referring to a single immediate decision, use present continuous: 'I'm just deciding right now.'

× I do make a list of my priority work or deadline is doesn't work much because I have a hard time to organize this.

✓ I do make a list of my priority tasks or deadlines, but it doesn't work well because I have a hard time organizing them.

Multiple issues: 'priority work' should be plural 'priority tasks' or 'priority work items'; 'deadline is doesn't work' is ungrammatical — use 'but it doesn't work well'. 'To organize this' should be 'organizing them' (gerund and correct object). Also use plural 'deadlines' if more than one.

× But the thing the benefit of this is make me know what is the deadline.

✓ But the benefit of this is that it helps me know what the deadline is.

Original sentence is missing connectors and correct verb forms. Use 'the benefit of this is that...' and 'helps me know' (third person singular verb 'helps') and proper word order for 'what the deadline is.'

× I think it's make it more organized and you can prioritize the task that what you gonna do first or done and you don't miss all the things that you have to do.

✓ I think it makes things more organized, and you can prioritize the tasks so you know what you're going to do first and what is already done, and you won't miss anything you have to do.

Use third person singular 'makes' after 'it'. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks'. 'That what you gonna do' is ungrammatical: use 'so you know what you're going to do first'. 'Gonna' is informal; use 'going to' in standard speech. Use 'won't miss anything' instead of 'don't miss all the things.' Also ensure consistent verb forms and clarity.

× I do both, but I prefer to make a list on the phone because it's can notice or remind you before the deadline.

✓ I do both, but I prefer to make a list on my phone because it can notify or remind you before the deadline.

Remove the extra 'it's' before the modal verb 'can'. Use 'can notify' (notify is more natural than 'notice' here) or 'can remind you'. Also 'on the phone' is better as 'on my phone' to indicate personal preference.