List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện cấu trúc trả lời: trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và ngắt quãng, dùng liên từ để nối ý và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Luyện phát âm các từ quan trọng và tránh tiếng ngập ngừng "uh/umm". Hạn chế câu quá dài và không rõ bằng cách chia thành 2-3 câu ngắn gọn.

Example: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list, especially when I'm planning for a party or a holiday. For example, before New Year I write down essentials like snacks, drinks and decorations so I don't forget anything.

Suggestion: Trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No), sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn và cung cấp ví dụ về việc danh sách có hiệu quả hay không. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản (I don't have a plan → I don't usually make plans). Tránh tiếng cười và tiếng ngập ngừng trong bài nói.

Example: Not usually — I don't often make a formal work list. However, when I have a big event or holiday project, I do create a checklist to organize tasks, and it helps me finish everything on time.

Suggestion: Cải thiện tính logic và nội dung: đưa ra lý do rõ ràng, mỗi lý do một câu, dùng liên từ (because, so, therefore) và ví dụ minh họa ngắn. Tránh mâu thuẫn trong ý (nói người không thích danh sách nhưng lại nói họ muốn có danh sách). Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (e.g., forgetful, disorganized).

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and dislike planning. Others avoid lists because they find them restrictive or they simply forget to update them.

Suggestion: Trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng câu khẳng định (I prefer...), giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và cho một ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên, tránh từ thừa và tiếng ngập ngừng. Sửa ngữ pháp (I prefer to make lists on my phone; the phrase "the least half" is unclear).

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can edit them easily. For instance, I use a notes app to track my daily tasks and check items off as I finish them.

× Sometime, uh, when I heard he'll make a plan for a party or a special holiday, I will make a list to buy, uh, buy something essential because, uh, sometime I also.

✓ Sometimes, when I hear he'll make a plan for a party or a special holiday, I make a list to buy essential items because sometimes I also need them.

The student mixed past and future tenses and used inconsistent adverbs. Use present simple 'hear' for habitual actions and 'make' for regular habits. Replace 'sometime' with 'sometimes' and use 'essential items' for clarity. Avoid repeating words like 'buy'. Suggestion: choose a consistent tense (present) for habitual situations and use plural countable nouns when appropriate.

× Firmly speaking, I'm a person who don't have plan, so I, uh, directly have a list for anything.

✓ Frankly speaking, I'm a person who doesn't have a plan, so I don't usually make a list for everything.

The relative clause subject 'who' refers to 'a person' (singular), so the verb must be 'doesn't' not 'don't'. Also use 'a plan' (article) and 'make a list' for idiomatic expression. 'Directly have a list for anything' is unclear; change to 'don't usually make a list for everything' to convey the intended meaning.

× But sometime if I have a special ha ha holiday, it will uh, make a list for work.

✓ But sometimes if I have a special holiday, I make a list for preparations.

Use 'sometimes' and present simple 'I make' for habitual or likely actions. 'It will make a list' is incorrect because 'it' has no clear subject; the speaker is the one who makes the list. 'For work' is vague; 'for preparations' or 'for the event' is clearer.

× I think because they want to show anything they work, uh, some or there are umm, unforgettable persons, uh, forgettable person.

✓ I think it's because they want to record the things they do, or there are unforgettable or forgetful people.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and nouns. 'Show anything they work' is ungrammatical; 'the things they do' is correct. 'Unforgettable persons' vs 'forgettable person' confused meaning; likely meant 'forgetful people'. Use plural consistency: 'people' rather than mixing singular and plural.

× So they want to have a list to make anything, uh, surely.

✓ So they want to have a list to make sure they don't forget anything.

The phrase 'to make anything, surely' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use the idiomatic structure 'to make sure' + clause and 'anything' follows 'forget' to express purpose: 'to make sure they don't forget anything'.

× I'll offer make a list in my phone, in technology, in iPhone, uh, I uh, usually make a list in daily life, uh, the least half, umm, what I do in a day.

✓ I usually make a list on my phone, using my iPhone; I typically list about the main things I do in a day.

Use preposition 'on' with 'phone' ('on my phone'). 'In technology' is unnecessary. 'The least half' is unclear; replace with 'the main things' or 'the most important half' depending on intent. Keep tense and adverb placement natural: 'I usually make a list' for habitual action.