Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a more direct and concise answer first, then add specific reasons with clear linking words. Avoid repetition and unnecessary phrases to sound more natural.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because I am currently pursuing my bachelor's degree, and many of my courses require research and reading. Therefore, I visit the library regularly to study and access academic resources.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about what you read and why to enrich your answer.

Example: In the library, I usually read books and articles about economics and my course subjects. Additionally, I keep myself updated by reading the latest news, which helps me stay informed about current events.

Suggestion: Try to avoid vague expressions like 'and stuff' and be more precise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain your habits clearly and naturally.

Example: When I was a kid, I rarely went to the library because I preferred studying at home. Since I was more of an indoor person, I found it more comfortable to learn in my own space.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words and try to give a general opinion or guess if you don't have exact knowledge. Use polite language and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I'm not sure about the habits of Chinese kids regarding library visits, but I believe that many children in China do go to libraries to study and read, as education is highly valued there.

× I was doing my bachelors in the recent years and I used to go go there quite often because my course required me to do so.

✓ I was doing my bachelor's in recent years and I used to go there quite often because my course required me to do so.

The phrase 'was doing' is correct for past continuous, but 'bachelors' should be possessive as 'bachelor's' to refer to the degree. Also, 'go go' is a repetition error; it should be 'go'. The phrase 'in the recent years' is better as 'in recent years' without 'the'.

× In the library I usually read read about economics, latest news and also I read about my course.

✓ In the library I usually read about economics, the latest news, and also I read about my course.

The repetition 'read read' is an error and should be corrected to a single 'read'. Also, 'latest news' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify the news being referred to.

× When I was a kid I wasn't used to going to the library and stuff.

✓ When I was a kid I wasn't used to going to the library and such.

The phrase 'and stuff' is informal and vague; 'and such' is a more appropriate expression in this context. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct.

× I'm more of an indoor kid so I used to.

✓ I'm more of an indoor kid, so I used to.

A comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses properly. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× I do not know if Chinese goods whether Chinese goods go to the library because I I've never met someone from China, so I don't know.

✓ I do not know if Chinese kids go to the library because I've never met someone from China, so I don't know.

'Chinese goods' is incorrect; it should be 'Chinese kids'. The phrase 'whether Chinese goods' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'I I've' is a repetition error and should be 'I've'.