Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'want to reading' nên là 'want to read'. Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my house. Instead, I prefer reading books on my own device at home, which is more convenient for me.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp lại thông tin đã nói trước đó. Câu trả lời hiện tại dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'reading book on my soft surface'. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

Example: Since I rarely visit the library, I usually read books at home where it's quiet and private, allowing me to concentrate better.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'they're very enormous' nên là 'it was very big'. Hãy sử dụng câu nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, the library near my house was very big. My dad encouraged me to read more, so I usually went there every weekend with my mom or sometimes my sister.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh nói rằng câu hỏi khó và không biết, thay vào đó có thể đưa ra ý kiến chung hoặc nói về quan điểm cá nhân một cách rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, cần cải thiện cách diễn đạt và cấu trúc câu.

Example: Although I'm not Chinese, I believe that many Chinese children often visit libraries because education is highly valued in their culture.

× Besides I want to reading books on myself server in my house.

✓ Besides, I want to read books by myself on my server in my house.

The verb 'want' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'read', not the '-ing' form 'reading'. The phrase 'myself server' is unclear and likely a mistake; it is corrected to 'by myself on my server' to make sense. Also, a comma is added after 'Besides' for correct punctuation.

× I really love reading book on my soft surface in my house because it's it's private and I don't have to go anywhere.

✓ I really love reading books on my soft surface in my house because it's private and I don't have to go anywhere.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, which is countable and plural in this context. Also, the repeated 'it's' is corrected to a single 'it's'.

× Library is very near my house and my dad said that we have to read more.

✓ The library is very near my house and my dad said that we have to read more.

The noun 'Library' needs the definite article 'The' and should be singular 'library' to refer to a specific place near the house.

× So every weekend I usually go to the library to read book with my mom or sometimes my sister.

✓ So every weekend I usually went to the library to read books with my mom or sometimes my sister.

Since the question is about the past ('Did you go to the library when you were a kid?'), the verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went'. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' as it refers to reading multiple books.

× This question is very difficult because I'm not Chinese, so I don't know how often do Chinese kids go to the library And it's, I think in my opinion, I think is is very usually because children in Chinese really smart.

✓ This question is very difficult because I'm not Chinese, so I don't know how often Chinese kids go to the library. And I think, in my opinion, it is very usual because Chinese children are really smart.

The sentence has several issues: the question word order 'how often do Chinese kids go' should be 'how often Chinese kids go' in indirect speech. The phrase 'it's, I think in my opinion, I think is is very usually' is redundant and ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'I think, in my opinion, it is very usual'. Also, 'children in Chinese' is corrected to 'Chinese children' and 'really smart' is made a complete sentence with 'are'.