Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I don't often go to the library because I am very busy with my studies as a trial grader. Instead, I usually read on my iPhone or use the internet.'

Example: I don't often go to the library because I am very busy with my studies as a trial grader. Instead, I usually read on my iPhone or use the internet to study.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary usage is important. For example, 'I rarely go to the library because I am busy with my studies. However, when I do visit, I usually read short books or look for information.'

Example: I rarely go to the library because I am busy with my studies. However, when I do visit, I usually read short books or look for information.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors. Use past tense consistently and link your ideas smoothly. For example, 'No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I preferred hanging out with my friends and going to the park. However, my mother bought me Doraemon comics, which I usually read at home.'

Example: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I preferred hanging out with my friends and going to the park. However, my mother bought me Doraemon comics, which I usually read at home.

Suggestion: Your answer is honest but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Also, try to link your ideas better. For example, 'I am from Vietnam, so I am not sure about Chinese children's habits. However, in Vietnam, it depends on the family, but many children prefer going to the park with their friends.'

Example: I am from Vietnam, so I am not sure about Chinese children's habits. However, in Vietnam, it depends on the family, but many children prefer going to the park with their friends.

× Every day I need to go my school and I'm very busy with my study because I'm a trial grader so I don't often go to the library and instead of go to the library I reading by my iPhone and Internet.

✓ Every day I need to go to my school and I'm very busy with my study because I'm a trial grader so I don't often go to the library and instead of going to the library I read on my iPhone and the Internet.

The phrase 'instead of go to the library' is incorrect because after 'instead of' a verb should be in the '-ing' form, so it should be 'instead of going to the library'. Also, 'I reading' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I read' to match the present simple tense. Additionally, 'go my school' is missing the preposition 'to', so it should be 'go to my school'. 'By my iPhone and Internet' is better expressed as 'on my iPhone and the Internet' because we use 'on' for devices and platforms.

× Every day I need to go my school and I'm very busy with my study because I'm a trial grader so I don't often go to the library and instead of go to the library I reading by my iPhone and Internet.

✓ Every day I need to go to my school and I'm very busy with my study because I'm a trial grader so I don't often go to the library and instead of going to the library I read on my iPhone and the Internet.

The phrase 'go my school' is missing the preposition 'to'. The correct phrase is 'go to my school'. Also, 'reading by my iPhone and Internet' should be 'read on my iPhone and the Internet' because we use 'on' for devices and platforms.

× Because I'm busy with my study so I don't need free time to go to library so much.

✓ Because I'm busy with my study, I don't have much free time to go to the library.

The phrase 'I don't need free time' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'I don't have much free time'. Also, 'to go to library' is missing the article 'the' before 'library'. The word 'so much' is better replaced with 'much' to express quantity properly here.

× Because I'm busy with my study so I don't need free time to go to library so much.

✓ Because I'm busy with my study, I don't have much free time to go to the library.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. It should be 'go to the library'.

× But if I go to the library I think I reading book short or looking for the direction.

✓ But if I go to the library, I think I read books shortly or look for directions.

The phrase 'I reading book short' is incorrect; it should be 'I read books shortly'. Also, 'looking for the direction' should be 'look for directions' to match the present simple tense and plural form for general directions.

× But if I go to the library I think I reading book short or looking for the direction.

✓ But if I go to the library, I think I read books shortly or look for directions.

The phrase 'looking for the direction' is better expressed as 'look for directions' because 'directions' is usually plural and no article is needed here.

× No, I didn't because when I was a child I like to hang out with my friends and I enjoy going to the park.

✓ No, I didn't because when I was a child I liked to hang out with my friends and I enjoyed going to the park.

The sentence refers to past habits, so the verbs 'like' and 'enjoy' should be in the past tense 'liked' and 'enjoyed' to maintain tense consistency.

× But my mother bought me a Doraemon cartoon and I usually reading it at my home.

✓ But my mother bought me a Doraemon cartoon and I usually read it at my home.

The phrase 'I usually reading it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I usually read it' to match the present simple tense for habitual actions.

× I am from Vietnam so I don't resort to what the kids of Chinese often go to the library, so I don't know this question.

✓ I am from Vietnam so I don't know whether Chinese kids often go to the library, so I don't know the answer to this question.

The phrase 'I don't resort to what the kids of Chinese' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'I don't know whether Chinese kids often go to the library'. Also, 'this question' is better expressed as 'the answer to this question'.

× But in Vietnam the kid it depends on each family and I think they like to go to the park with your friends.

✓ But in Vietnam, it depends on each family and I think kids like to go to the park with their friends.

The word 'kid' should be plural 'kids' to match the plural verb 'like'. Also, 'your friends' should be 'their friends' to maintain third person plural pronoun agreement.