Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "especially when I entered college" which is slightly awkward. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to limit your answer to 4-5 sentences and use more varied vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library in my free time because it provides a quiet environment for studying and completing assignments. Additionally, borrowing books from the library is more economical than purchasing them. Overall, it's a convenient place for me to focus and access resources.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. The phrase "Are you ready to do my assignments in the library?" is confusing and irrelevant. Also, "I watched them in the library" is incorrect; you likely meant "I read them." Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: In the library, I usually study and work on my assignments because it's quiet and free from distractions. I also borrow books that interest me and spend time reading them there. This helps me learn more effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but the linking phrase "on the one hand... on the other hand" is used correctly but could be smoother. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and avoid repeating "library" too often. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: No, I rarely visited the library as a child because it was far from my home and I didn't find it very interesting at that time. Instead, I preferred other activities closer to where I lived.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "young children in Chinese" should be "young children in China," and "enter the college and find whatever you want" is unclear. Use linking words to organize your ideas and be more specific. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: It depends on their age. Young children in China usually have a busy schedule with schoolwork, so they rarely visit the library. However, once they reach college, they have more free time and often use the library to study and find resources they need.

× I often go to the library in my spare time, especially when I entered college.

✓ I often went to the library in my spare time, especially when I entered college.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I entered college'), so the verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to maintain tense consistency.

× I found that library is a place that allows me to study and do my assignment without any distractions.

✓ I found that the library is a place that allows me to study and do my assignments without any distractions.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the particular library. Also, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context of multiple tasks.

× Also, I can borrow books because it's cheaper than buying a new one.

✓ Also, I can borrow books because it's cheaper than buying new ones.

The phrase 'a new one' is singular, but 'books' is plural. To maintain agreement, 'new ones' should be used.

× Oh, Are you ready to do my assignments in the library?

✓ Oh, I am ready to do my assignments in the library.

The original sentence is a question that does not fit the context. It should be a statement expressing the student's readiness to do assignments in the library.

× Also, I borrowed some books I like and I watched them in the library, but most of the time I choose to study and do my assignment.

✓ Also, I borrowed some books I liked and I read them in the library, but most of the time I chose to study and do my assignments.

The verbs 'like', 'watch', and 'choose' should be in the past tense 'liked', 'read', and 'chose' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Watched' is incorrect for books; 'read' is appropriate. 'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments'.

× I seldom went to the library when I was a kid because on the one hand it is really distant from my family, on the other hand I'm not interested in it.

✓ I seldom went to the library when I was a kid because, on the one hand, it was really far from my home; on the other hand, I wasn't interested in it.

The phrase 'distant from my family' is awkward; 'far from my home' is more natural. Also, commas are needed after 'on the one hand' and 'on the other hand' for clarity. 'It is' should be 'it was' to match past tense. 'I'm' should be 'I wasn't' for past tense.

× For example, young children in Chinese, they have tasks to do and there is no time for them to go to library.

✓ For example, young children in China have tasks to do and there is no time for them to go to the library.

'In Chinese' should be 'in China' to refer to the country. Also, 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× But as long as they enter college, they will have spare time to enter the college and find whatever you want.

✓ But once they enter college, they will have spare time to go to the library and find whatever they want.

The phrase 'as long as' is incorrect here; 'once' is better to indicate time. 'Enter the college' is awkward; 'go to the library' is clearer. 'You want' should be 'they want' to maintain pronoun consistency.