Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and avoid repetition. Use correct prepositions and articles, and keep your answer concise with clear reasons.

Example: Yes, I go to the library daily because I find it essential for my studies.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your activities.

Example: Recently, I have been reading novels and subject-related books. Currently, I spend my free time in the library practicing maths because I need to improve my skills.

Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and avoid grammatical errors. Make your answer clearer and more coherent by structuring sentences properly.

Example: Yes, I often went to the library with my parents or elder brother because they studied there. During my childhood, I enjoyed reading comic books as I was interested in reading.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and avoid irrelevant information. Use correct grammar and clearer expressions to convey your ideas.

Example: I am not sure about Chinese children, but in India, many children often go to the library for their studies, which is very helpful.

× Yes Sir, I go to library in daily basis because of my studies.

✓ Yes Sir, I go to the library on a daily basis because of my studies.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required. Also, the phrase 'in daily basis' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on a daily basis'. This is a common prepositional phrase used to indicate frequency.

× That's why I need to go library because it is very necessary for me.

✓ That's why I need to go to the library because it is very necessary for me.

The phrase 'go library' is incorrect; the verb 'go' should be followed by the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the' before 'library'. This is because 'library' is a specific place here.

× Recently I read the novels and books related to my subjects but uh currently I'm doing maths in my free time in library because I need to hard practice in maths.

✓ Recently I read novels and books related to my subjects, but currently I'm doing maths in my free time in the library because I need to practice maths hard.

The phrase 'in library' should be 'in the library' because 'library' is a specific place. Also, 'the novels' is better as 'novels' unless referring to specific novels. Additionally, 'hard practice' is not idiomatic; 'practice hard' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, I often go to library with my parents or my elder brother is because they go and do study there.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library with my parents or my elder brother because they went and studied there.

The question is about past habits, so the past tense 'went' and 'studied' should be used instead of present tense 'go' and 'do study'. Also, 'go to library' should be 'go to the library'. The phrase 'my elder brother is because' is incorrect and should be simplified to 'my elder brother because'.

× Yes, I often go to library with my parents or my elder brother is because they go and do study there.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library with my parents or my elder brother because they went and studied there.

As above, 'go to library' should be 'go to the library' because 'library' is a specific place.

× Then I go and read some comic books in my childhood because I am interesting interested in reading books.

✓ Then I went and read some comic books in my childhood because I was interested in reading books.

Since the sentence refers to past time ('in my childhood'), past tense verbs 'went' and 'was interested' should be used instead of present tense 'go' and 'am interesting'. Also, 'interesting' is an adjective describing something that causes interest; the correct form here is 'interested' to describe the person's feeling.

× Then I go and read some comic books in my childhood because I am interesting interested in reading books.

✓ Then I went and read some comic books in my childhood because I was interested in reading books.

As above, 'go and read' should be 'went and read' for past tense, and 'interested' is the correct adjective to describe personal feelings.

× I do not know that Chinese children should just go to library because I am an Indian and as we talk about India, there are many children go to the library for their studies and it is very grateful in my country.

✓ I do not know if Chinese children usually go to the library because I am an Indian. As for India, many children go to the library for their studies and it is very good in my country.

The phrase 'go to library' should be 'go to the library'. Also, 'should just go' is incorrect in this context; 'usually go' or 'often go' is better. The phrase 'it is very grateful' is incorrect; 'it is very good' or 'it is very common' is appropriate. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.