Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more concise and grammatically correct by saying, "I go to the library almost every day because it feels like a safe and comfortable place for me."

Example: I go to the library almost every day because it feels like a safe and comfortable place for me.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear phrases and filler words. Instead of "sit in a piece," say "sit in a quiet place." Also, avoid filler words like "uh." A better answer would be: "I usually sit in a quiet spot to read books or browse the internet."

Example: I usually sit in a quiet spot to read books or browse the internet.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and contains grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. For example: "I have been going to the library since I was five because it offers free Wi-Fi, books, and a peaceful environment."

Example: I have been going to the library since I was five because it offers free Wi-Fi, books, and a peaceful environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid filler phrases like "cool question" and be more direct. If unsure, you can say: "I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids visit libraries because education is important in China."

Example: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids visit libraries because education is important in China.

× I do go to the library mostly every day, its my safe place where I belong to.

✓ I do go to the library almost every day; it's my safe place where I belong.

The pronoun 'its' should be 'it's' (it is) to indicate possession. Also, 'mostly every day' is awkward; 'almost every day' is more natural. The phrase 'where I belong to' is incorrect because 'belong' does not require a preposition; it should be 'where I belong.'

× I sit in a piece and read some books or, uh, watch the Internet.

✓ I sit in peace and read some books or, uh, browse the Internet.

The phrase 'sit in a piece' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'sit in peace.' Also, 'watch the Internet' is unnatural; the correct verb is 'browse' or 'surf' the Internet.

× I went to the library several times since I was 5.

✓ I have gone to the library several times since I was 5.

The phrase 'since I was 5' requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action continuing from the past to the present. Therefore, 'have gone' is correct instead of simple past 'went.'

× I found that actually the library are a very interesting place since it offers you a Wi-Fi and books and piece and so yeah, that's it.

✓ I found that actually the library is a very interesting place since it offers Wi-Fi, books, and peace, so yeah, that's it.

The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are.' Also, 'a Wi-Fi' is incorrect because 'Wi-Fi' is uncountable and does not need an article. The word 'piece' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'peace.'

× Cool question, but actually I don't think I have idea about this but it looks like yes they do go to the library because most of the Chinese kids are actually very intelligent and very. My mind.

✓ Cool question, but actually I don't think I have an idea about this. It looks like yes, they do go to the library because most Chinese kids are actually very intelligent and very open-minded.

The phrase 'I have idea' is missing the article 'an.' The sentence is fragmented and unclear; 'very.' is incomplete. 'My mind' is incorrect here; the intended phrase is likely 'open-minded.' Also, 'most of the Chinese kids' can be simplified to 'most Chinese kids.'