Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases, such as "consent in more." Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: No, I don't go to the library often. However, I usually visit it during exam periods because the quiet environment helps me concentrate better.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and hesitations. Try to answer directly with clear sentences and avoid filler words like 'uh.' Use linking words to organize your ideas logically and provide specific details about your activities in the library.

Example: When I go to the library, I usually find a quiet corner to sit. Then, I make a to-do list to organize my study tasks, such as improving my computer skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and repetitive phrases. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Adding linking words will improve the flow of your answer.

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because it was close to my house. I enjoyed reading fairy tales and children's comics there since the place was calm and pleasant.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat off-topic and unclear. Try to directly answer the question about Chinese kids and provide specific observations or opinions. Use correct sentence structures and avoid unnecessary personal information unless relevant.

Example: I am from Bangladesh, so I haven't often seen Chinese kids in the library. However, many Bangladeshi children visit the library regularly to read picture books and comics.

× No, I did not go to the library frequently.

✓ No, I do not go to the library frequently.

The question is in the present tense ('Do you often go'), so the answer should also be in the present tense. Using 'did not go' indicates past tense, which is inconsistent here.

× Basically the exam times I go to the library because the environment of the library is very good, very silent.

✓ Basically, during exam times I go to the library because the environment of the library is very good and very quiet.

The phrase 'the exam times' is awkward; 'during exam times' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'silent' is an adjective usually describing people or things that do not make noise; 'quiet' is more appropriate for environments.

× That helps me to consent in more.

✓ That helps me to concentrate more.

The word 'consent' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'concentrate', which means to focus attention. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning.

× Firstly I went to the library and choose a corner bin bridge of the library and sit there.

✓ Firstly, I go to the library and choose a corner in the library and sit there.

The question is about usual actions ('What do you usually do?'), so present tense should be used. 'Went' and 'sit' are inconsistent; 'go' and 'sit' should be in present tense. Also, 'bin bridge' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'corner in the library'.

× Also make A to do list uh for and then may I start to do according the list?

✓ I also make a to-do list and then start to do tasks according to the list.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure and word order improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× What to do uh how? How can I improve my UH computer?

✓ I think about what to do and how I can improve my computer skills.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Rephrasing to a complete sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× Yes, I did go to the library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid.

Using 'did go' is grammatically correct but less natural in affirmative past statements. 'I went' is the simple past tense and more appropriate here.

× I went there to read lots of fairy tales and kids comic.

✓ I went there to read lots of fairy tales and kids' comics.

'Kids comic' should be plural possessive 'kids' comics' to indicate comics for children.

× I like the place that time very much because the place was so nice and calm.

✓ I liked the place at that time very much because it was so nice and calm.

The verb tense should be past ('liked') to match 'that time'. Also, 'calm' is acceptable but 'quiet' might be more natural for a library environment.

× As I am a Bangladeshi so I that time I never saw any Chinese kids in the library.

✓ As I am Bangladeshi, at that time I never saw any Chinese kids in the library.

The phrase 'I that time' is incorrect; it should be 'at that time'. Also, 'a Bangladeshi' is less common than 'Bangladeshi' as a nationality adjective.

× I yes I saw many Bangladeshi kids.

✓ Yes, I saw many Bangladeshi kids.

The original sentence has redundant words and incorrect word order. Removing 'I' before 'yes' corrects the sentence.

× They also love to read photos and kids comics there.

✓ They also love to read picture books and kids' comics there.

'Read photos' is incorrect; people read picture books or look at photos. 'Kids comics' should be plural possessive 'kids' comics'.