Part 1
Examiner
Do you often go to the library?
Candidate
I don't go to libraries at all because I'm not really into reading and actually in my country the library system is not really developed and you cannot like borrow a book from there, you can only you can only read books inside the library and there are not a lot of books in the library.
Examiner
What do you usually do in the library?
Candidate
Well, obviously people usually go to libraries to read books, but I prefer to go to libraries just to study because libraries have really quiet environments and nothing disturbing you from the learning.
Examiner
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Candidate
No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid. I have never went to the library when I was a kid. My parents, they didn't teach me to read books. So since the childhood I didn't read any book. Well, actually I read couple of ones but generally no.
Examiner
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Candidate
I cannot know for sure because I have never been in China, but according to the memes on the Internet, uh, Chinese kids, they, they almost live in the library.
Do you often go to the library?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Ответ слишком длинный и немного повторяется. Следует сделать ответ более естественным и лаконичным, избегая повторов и излишних деталей. Например, можно начать с прямого ответа, а затем кратко объяснить причину.
Example: I rarely go to the library because I'm not very interested in reading. Also, in my country, libraries are not well developed, and you can only read books there without borrowing them.
What do you usually do in the library?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и убрать излишние слова. Используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода и избегайте тавтологии.
Example: People usually go to libraries to read, but I prefer to study there because the environment is quiet and free from distractions.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать правильные времена и избегать повторов, а также сделать ответ более структурированным и естественным.
Example: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because my parents didn't encourage reading. I read a few books occasionally, but generally, I didn't visit libraries.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Ответ неформальный и содержит паузы. Лучше использовать более формальный стиль и избегать слов-паразитов. Также можно добавить более конкретную информацию или мнение.
Example: I'm not sure because I have never been to China, but I have heard that Chinese children spend a lot of time studying in libraries.
× I have never went to the library when I was a kid.
✓ I have never gone to the library when I was a kid.
The verb 'went' is the simple past form, but after 'have never' (present perfect), the past participle form 'gone' should be used. Use 'have never gone' to correctly form the present perfect tense.