Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: You should directly answer the examiner's question instead of repeating it. Provide a clear and concise response about your library visits.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library to study and borrow books.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Instead, answer directly with specific activities you do in the library, using linking words if you add details.

Example: I usually read books and study quietly in the library because it is a peaceful environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words.

Example: I didn't go to the library often when I was a kid because my school didn't have good library facilities. However, I sometimes borrowed books from the local library.

Suggestion: Your answer has some good points but lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific examples. Also, avoid generalizations without support.

Example: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because schools provide good facilities. They spend time reading books and learning new subjects, which helps improve their education.

× Not really, I owed to the library only sometimes because my college or school don't have the nice facilities of library.

✓ Not really, I went to the library only sometimes because my college or school didn't have nice library facilities.

The verb 'owed' is incorrect in this context; the past tense of 'go' is 'went'. Also, 'don't' should be 'didn't' to match the past tense context. Additionally, 'the nice facilities of library' is awkward; 'nice library facilities' is more natural.

× Not really, I owed to the library only sometimes because my college or school don't have the nice facilities of library.

✓ Not really, I went to the library only sometimes because my college or school didn't have nice library facilities.

The phrase 'facilities' is plural, so it should be matched with plural verbs and articles. Also, 'the nice facilities of library' is incorrect; it should be 'nice library facilities' without 'the'.

× Yeah, the education in China is far better than other country.

✓ Yeah, the education in China is far better than in other countries.

'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' to correctly compare education in China with multiple other countries.

× There is a good facilities of library student into the libraries to spend time by reading books, learning new things, learning new technology, study about new subject matter.

✓ There are good library facilities for students to spend time in the libraries reading books, learning new things, learning new technology, and studying new subjects.

'Facilities' is plural, so 'There is' should be 'There are'. Also, 'a good facilities' is incorrect; 'good library facilities' is correct. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. The phrase 'study about new subject matter' should be 'studying new subjects' for grammatical correctness.

× There is a good facilities of library student into the libraries to spend time by reading books, learning new things, learning new technology, study about new subject matter.

✓ There are good library facilities for students to spend time in the libraries reading books, learning new things, learning new technology, and studying new subjects.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Reordering and rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness, such as using 'for students to spend time in the libraries' and parallel gerunds 'reading', 'learning', 'studying'.

× That's the reason why China is art of education.

✓ That's the reason why China is a part of education.

The phrase 'China is art of education' is incorrect and unclear. It likely intends to say 'China is a part of education' or 'China is a leader in education'. The correction assumes 'part' was intended.