Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like 'I'm not penchant of' and grammatical errors such as 'when my board classes was there'.

Example: I don't often visit the library, but last year during my board exams, I went there several times to study and attend online classes because it was a quiet place.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like 'avoid to go' and 'never required to go'.

Example: No, I didn't go to the library as a kid because I didn't have much academic pressure, and my parents helped me with my studies at home.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases. Start with a direct answer, then add your opinion with reasons using linking words. Also, be careful with sentence structure and vocabulary to sound more natural.

Example: I am not sure about Chinese kids since I am Indian, but I believe they often visit libraries to improve their studies and practice more effectively.

× I'm not penchant of visiting library

✓ I'm not a fan of visiting the library

The phrase 'not penchant of' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'not a fan of' or 'not fond of'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× when my board classes was there

✓ when my board classes were there

The subject 'board classes' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to agree in number.

× I went to library for some days

✓ I went to the library for some days

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× there I went for my studies and for the online classes

✓ there I went for my studies and for online classes

The phrase 'online classes' is general and does not need the definite article 'the'.

× there's no so much academic stress or tension on me

✓ there wasn't so much academic stress or tension on me

The sentence refers to the past, so 'there's' (there is) should be changed to 'there wasn't' (there was not). Also, 'so much' is correct here to indicate quantity.

× I avoid to go to library

✓ I avoided going to the library

The verb 'avoid' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× my parents also give me suggestions to about my studies

✓ my parents also gave me suggestions about my studies

The verb tense should be past ('gave') to match the context. The preposition 'to' before 'about' is incorrect and should be removed.

× so I never required to go to library

✓ so I never needed to go to the library

The verb 'require' is not commonly used in this context; 'needed' is more appropriate. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× a kid never have to go to library

✓ a kid never has to go to the library

The singular subject 'a kid' requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× if I get an idea then I think they often go to library

✓ if I get an idea then I think they often go to the library

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.