Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "very much often" and improve sentence structure. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: These days, I don't visit the library often because I can access most resources online through various websites and software, which saves me time and effort.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition (e.g., "species species"). Also, try to be more specific and natural in your descriptions.

Example: I usually go to the library on weekend afternoons to read books about recent scientific discoveries, such as new animals or species that have been recently found.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, when I was a kid, my school had a small library and we had a weekly library period. I enjoyed choosing and reading horror-themed books during that time.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and lacks confidence. Try to express your opinion more clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. Avoid filler words like "so so" and improve sentence structure.

Example: Although I'm not very sure, I believe Chinese children often enjoy going to the library because reading helps them imagine and create stories in their minds.

× Well, these days I don't think I can visit library very much often because every single thing is accessible through Internet, a lot of software and websites.

✓ Well, these days I don't think I can visit the library very often because every single thing is accessible through the Internet, a lot of software and websites.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' and 'Internet' because they refer to specific, known entities. Omitting 'the' in these cases is incorrect in English.

× Well, these days I don't think I can visit library very much often because every single thing is accessible through Internet, a lot of software and websites.

✓ Well, these days I don't think I can visit the library very often because every single thing is accessible through the Internet, a lot of software and websites.

The phrase 'very much often' is incorrect; the correct adverb placement is 'very often' to modify the verb properly.

× So I usually take their help and it saves me time and a lot of efforts while going there.

✓ So I usually take their help and it saves me time and a lot of effort while going there.

The word 'effort' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'efforts' in this context.

× For me, I usually go to read books, especially whenever I got the free time at weekends and I usually do it in afternoon.

✓ For me, I usually go to read books, especially whenever I get free time on weekends and I usually do it in the afternoon.

The verb 'got' is past tense but the sentence refers to habitual actions, so present tense 'get' is correct. Also, 'in afternoon' requires the definite article 'the' and 'at weekends' is better expressed as 'on weekends'.

× For me, I usually go to read books, especially whenever I got the free time at weekends and I usually do it in afternoon.

✓ For me, I usually go to read books, especially whenever I get free time on weekends and I usually do it in the afternoon.

The phrase 'in afternoon' requires the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× So I search for the interesting books that I find very curious about like the scientific new discoveries and new animals or the species species which was discovered recently.

✓ So I search for interesting books that I am very curious about, like scientific new discoveries and new animals or species which were discovered recently.

The phrase 'I find very curious about' is incorrect; 'I am very curious about' is correct. Also, 'species species' is a repetition error. The verb 'was' should be plural 'were' to agree with the plural subject 'species'.

× Yes, remember, yes. I don't remember when we were a kid.

✓ Yes, I remember. I don't remember when we were kids.

The phrase 'when we were a kid' is incorrect because 'we' is plural and 'kid' is singular; it should be 'kids'.

× When I was a kid, our school had a small library in our premises and there was a library period every week.

✓ When I was a kid, our school had a small library on its premises and there was a library period every week.

The phrase 'in our premises' is incorrect; 'on its premises' is the correct expression referring to the school's property.

× So we go there, choose our books, choose the books which we like and for me it was the horror theme based books and I enjoy reading it a lot.

✓ So we went there, chose our books, chose the books which we liked and for me it was horror-themed books and I enjoyed reading them a lot.

The sentence refers to past events, so past tense verbs 'went', 'chose', 'liked', and 'enjoyed' are appropriate. Also, 'horror theme based books' should be 'horror-themed books'. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'books'.

× I would say I'm not very much aware of that Chinese either.

✓ I would say I'm not very aware of that about Chinese either.

The phrase 'aware of that Chinese' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'aware of that about Chinese' or better rephrased for clarity.

× Chinese can go or not but I think as a kid they are very much into reading books and create some of the imaginary things while reading the stories.

✓ Chinese kids can go or not, but I think as kids they are very much into reading books and creating some imaginary things while reading stories.

The sentence mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. 'As a kid' should be 'as kids' to agree with 'they'. Also, 'create' should be 'creating' to maintain parallel structure.

× So so I believe yes they do enjoy while going to library.

✓ So, I believe yes, they do enjoy going to the library.

The repeated 'so so' is redundant. Also, 'while going to library' is awkward; 'going to the library' is correct. Commas improve sentence clarity.