Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors such as 'visit library' instead of 'visit the library'.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library, especially during my undergraduate studies. I enjoy reading various books related to my field, such as medicine, surgery, and gynecology. Moreover, I learn about recent research findings and try to apply them in practice.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and correct grammar. Be specific but avoid repetition. For example, instead of 'I love reading medicine much', say 'I enjoy reading about medicine, especially antibiotics'.

Example: Usually, I look for recently published books by researchers in my field. Since I am interested in medicine, I particularly enjoy reading about antibiotics and learning about different types to enhance my knowledge.

Suggestion: Improve clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid incomplete sentences like 'because I'm during that time'.

Example: I did not visit the library when I was a kid because we lived in a remote village. Later, when I was in 5th standard, we moved to the city, but even then, I rarely went to the library due to my busy school schedule.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Make your answer more structured and complete. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a clear opinion or information.

Example: I am not very familiar with Chinese children since I have never been to China. However, from what I have seen on social media, many Chinese kids visit libraries frequently and are well acquainted with various types of books.

× Yes, I do often go to the library.

✓ Yes, I often do go to the library.

The adverb 'often' should be placed before the auxiliary verb 'do' for correct emphasis and natural English word order.

× When I was studying my undergraduation, I regularly visit library because I love reading books, different types of books that related to my subject that is medicine, surgery or gynecology.

✓ When I was studying my undergraduation, I regularly visited the library because I loved reading books, different types of books that related to my subject, which is medicine, surgery, or gynecology.

The sentence refers to a past time ('was studying'), so verbs should be in the past tense ('visited', 'loved'). Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. 'That related' should be 'that relate' or better 'which relate' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× I regularly visit library because I love reading books, different types of books that related to my subject that is medicine, surgery or gynecology.

✓ I regularly visited the library because I loved reading books, different types of books that relate to my subject, which is medicine, surgery, or gynecology.

The noun 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the'. Without it, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× different types of books that related to my subject that is medicine, surgery or gynecology.

✓ different types of books that relate to my subject, which is medicine, surgery, or gynecology.

The relative clause should use present tense 'relate' because the books still relate to the subject. Also, 'that is' is better replaced with 'which is' for clarity.

× And I learn different kinds of things that the researchers have published and I apply the same thing.

✓ And I learn different kinds of things that researchers have published and I apply the same things.

The verb 'learn' is in present tense which is acceptable if referring to current habits. 'The researchers' can be simplified to 'researchers' as a general group. 'The same thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'different kinds of things'.

× I often look for the books that are recently published by researchers and are in our library.

✓ I often look for books that have been recently published by researchers and are in our library.

The phrase 'recently published' should be in present perfect passive 'have been recently published' to indicate recent action affecting the present. Also, 'the books' can be simplified to 'books' unless referring to specific books.

× There are various kinds of books that related to my field and I love reading medicine much because I love antibiotics and I prefer to use different types of antibiotics.

✓ There are various kinds of books that relate to my field and I love reading about medicine because I love antibiotics and I prefer to use different types of antibiotics.

'That related' should be 'that relate' to maintain present tense. 'Reading medicine much' is incorrect; it should be 'reading about medicine'. The definite article is not needed before 'medicine' in this context.

× When I was a kid, I never visited library because we live in a remote village.

✓ When I was a kid, I never visited the library because we lived in a remote village.

Since the sentence refers to past time, verbs should be in past tense: 'visited' and 'lived'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× When I was a kid, I never visited library because we live in a remote village.

✓ When I was a kid, I never visited the library because we lived in a remote village.

The noun 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the'.

× During my childhood days, I think when I was in my 5th standard, we moved to the city.

✓ During my childhood days, I think when I was in my 5th standard, we moved to the city.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× Even though we moved to the city during my school days, I never visited a library because I'm during that time.

✓ Even though we moved to the city during my school days, I never visited a library because I was busy during that time.

The phrase 'I'm during that time' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'I was busy during that time' to explain the reason for not visiting the library.

× I'm not well known about the Chinese kids because I, I have never been there, but to my knowledge, umm, because they post on social media that uh, children from the engaged, they visit libraries frequently and they are well acquainted with different types of.

✓ I'm not well informed about Chinese kids because I have never been there, but to my knowledge, they post on social media that children there visit libraries frequently and are well acquainted with different types of books.

'I'm not well known about' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm not well informed about'. The phrase 'children from the engaged' is unclear and likely incorrect; it is corrected to 'children there'. The sentence was incomplete and is completed for clarity.