Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni uttor ta aro spostho o shothik vabe bolte paren. Prothome proshner uttor dite hobe, tarpor kichu bistarito kotha bolte paren. English e shothik sentence structure use korun ebong beshi proyojon chara kotha baraben na.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because it is close to my home. I enjoy reading different types of books there. It is a very pleasant experience for me.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o sentence structure er bhul ache. Proshner uttor shothik vabe dite hobe, topic sentence diye suru kore supporting details dite hobe. Linking words use kore kotha gulo jor dite paren.

Example: Usually, I read in the library because I love reading. I mostly enjoy story books and historical books. It is very enjoyable for me to spend time reading there.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o word choice er bhul ache. Proshner uttor shothik vabe dite hobe, topic sentence diye suru kore supporting details dite hobe. Sentence gulo shothik bhabe link korte hobe.

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child. My father liked reading, so he often took me with him. I visited the library many times during my childhood.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e onek bhul ache, ar eta onno desh o manusher opor boro dhoroner dharana toiri kore, ja thik na. Proshner uttor dite somoy shothik o shommanjonok bhabe kotha bolun. Sentence gulo shothik structure e bolun ebong proyojon moto supporting details din.

Example: I am not sure about that, but I think some Chinese kids may not go to the library often because of lack of convenience or interest. However, many children do enjoy reading and visiting libraries.

× Heavy trolley.

✓ I use a heavy trolley.

The original sentence 'Heavy trolley.' is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence structure error. To correct it, a subject and verb are needed to form a complete sentence. For example, 'I use a heavy trolley.' clearly expresses the idea.

× I go to library because it is not far from our home.

✓ I go to the library because it is not far from our home.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before singular countable nouns is incorrect in this context.

× That's why I of often go this place and read some various type books.

✓ That's why I often go to this place and read various types of books.

The adverb 'often' should be placed before the main verb 'go'. Also, 'of often' is incorrect. Additionally, 'go this place' needs the preposition 'to'. 'Some various type books' is incorrect; it should be 'various types of books'.

× Usually I do in library I I am a reading lover that's why I often go this place and reading various types of book like a story book and mostly the historical book.

✓ Usually, I go to the library. I am a reading lover; that's why I often go to this place and read various types of books like storybooks and mostly historical books.

The phrase 'do in library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity. 'Reading various types of book' should be 'read various types of books'. Articles and plural forms need correction.

× It is very enjoyable things for me that's why I read and enjoyed so much.

✓ It is very enjoyable for me; that's why I read and enjoy it so much.

'Enjoyable things' is incorrect here; 'enjoyable' is an adjective and should describe a singular or uncountable noun or be used with 'it'. Also, tense consistency is needed: 'read and enjoy' instead of 'read and enjoyed'.

× Absolutely, I went this place in childhood time because my father also have a reading about that.

✓ Absolutely, I went to this place in my childhood because my father also liked reading.

'Went this place' needs the preposition 'to'. 'Childhood time' is better expressed as 'my childhood'. 'Have a reading about that' is incorrect; it should be 'liked reading' or 'was interested in reading'.

× So I when he go this place, he always he always take me with him.

✓ So when he went to this place, he always took me with him.

The sentence refers to past events, so past tense verbs 'went' and 'took' should be used instead of present tense 'go' and 'take'. Also, 'he always he always' is repetitive and should be corrected.

× That's why I go go in many time in the library in childhood time.

✓ That's why I went many times to the library during my childhood.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past context. 'Go go' is a repetition error. 'Many time' should be 'many times'. 'In childhood time' is better as 'during my childhood'.

× Definitely not because I know that Chinese people don't like to go library and explore new things.

✓ Definitely not, because I know that Chinese people don't like to go to the library and explore new things.

The phrase 'go library' is missing the preposition 'to'. Also, a comma after 'Definitely not' improves clarity.

× There's not in her convenience.

✓ It is not convenient for them.

'There's not in her convenience' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is that it is not convenient for Chinese people, so 'It is not convenient for them' is appropriate.

× That's why I think I know there's Chinese people don't go live very it such As for their very uncomfortable place.

✓ That's why I think Chinese people don't go there because it is a very uncomfortable place for them.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly, using proper subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

× That's why Chinese people don't go in.

✓ That's why Chinese people don't go in there.

The verb 'go in' usually requires an object or adverb to specify where. Adding 'there' clarifies the meaning.