Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, use complete sentences and correct prepositions, for example, say 'go to the library' instead of 'go library'. Keep your answer concise and directly address the question.

Example: I don't visit the library very often, but I go there sometimes to borrow books. I prefer reading at home because I can concentrate better in a comfortable environment.

Suggestion: Reduce the use of filler sounds and pauses to improve fluency. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly to connect ideas. Also, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Example: I usually visit the library to borrow books because I am a teacher and need to stay updated. This helps me enrich my subject knowledge and improve my professional skills.

Suggestion: Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'What's happened?'. Use clear time expressions and complete your thoughts. Also, try to avoid repeating words and filler sounds to make your answer more natural and effective.

Example: Yes, I used to visit the library during our scheduled school library periods, about two or three times a week. We were encouraged to read storybooks or comics, and I especially enjoyed reading comics because they were very entertaining.

Suggestion: Try to speak more fluently by reducing filler words and pauses. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be more specific about how books help in children's development.

Example: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. Teachers and parents encourage them to use library resources because books play an important role in their development by improving their knowledge and imagination.

× Honestly, I do not uh visit library uh frequently uh, but sometimes to issue some book I have to go library.

✓ Honestly, I do not uh visit the library uh frequently uh, but sometimes to issue some book I have to go to the library.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required. Also, the preposition 'to' is needed before 'the library' to indicate movement towards a place.

× but sometimes to issue some book I have to go library.

✓ but sometimes to issue some book I have to go to the library.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place to indicate direction or destination.

× Otherwise, I like to uh read at my home because I concentrate more uh in UH when I'm in my comfortable zone.

✓ Otherwise, I like to uh read at my home because I concentrate more uh when I'm in my comfortable zone.

The phrase 'in UH' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'my home' is correct without an article, but 'comfortable zone' does not need 'my' or 'the' here.

× I usually visit library to borrow books and because I'm a teacher and I need to keep updated, uh, uh, so I, uh, go to, uh, get uh, new books or the magazines, uh, to enrich my subject knowledge and to enhance my professional skills.

✓ I usually visit the library to borrow books and because I'm a teacher and I need to keep updated, uh, uh, so I, uh, go to, uh, get uh, new books or magazines, uh, to enrich my subject knowledge and to enhance my professional skills.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the place. 'Magazines' is plural and does not need 'the' unless referring to specific magazines.

× What's happened? Two or three weeks, uh, three times a week.

✓ What happened? Two or three times a week, uh, three times a week.

The correct past tense question form is 'What happened?'. Also, 'two or three weeks' is unclear; 'two or three times a week' fits the context better.

× During these sessions, we were encouraged to read story books or comics, whatever our interest in uh, is.

✓ During these sessions, we were encouraged to read story books or comics, whatever our interest was.

The verb tense should be past ('was') to match the past context. Also, 'interest in' is incorrect here; 'interest was' is appropriate.

× And I really like to enjoy reading comics books because.

✓ And I really like to enjoy reading comic books because.

The correct term is 'comic books' (plural adjective 'comic' modifying 'books'), not 'comics books'.

× Yes, I think Chinese kids also, uh, go to the library frequently.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese kids also, uh, go to the library frequently.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× They must be encouraged by the teachers and the parents, uh, to utilize the resources at the, uh, library, uh, because in the development of kids, uh, books plays an important, uh, role.

✓ They must be encouraged by the teachers and the parents, uh, to utilize the resources at the, uh, library, uh, because in the development of kids, uh, books play an important, uh, role.

The verb 'books' is plural and should be followed by 'play' not 'plays'. Also, the preposition 'in' is correct here.