Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your response more coherent. For example, instead of repeating 'library' and 'search', you can use synonyms or phrases like 'visit the library' or 'look up information online'. Also, try to add a concluding sentence to wrap up your answer.

Example: Honestly, I don't visit the library very often because I find it less practical nowadays. Instead, I usually look up information on Google using my phone, which allows me to access data quickly and conveniently wherever I am. Therefore, I prefer online resources over traditional libraries.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'as far as I'm concerned' and 'something that we had assignment'. Be more specific and concise.

Example: In the library, I usually read books and conduct research for my thesis or school assignments. These activities help me gather information and deepen my understanding of various subjects.

Suggestion: Your answer provides relevant information but contains grammatical errors and repetitive use of 'so'. Try to use linking words like 'because', 'therefore', and avoid repeating the same word at the beginning of sentences. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'the our school' to 'our school'.

Example: Yes, I did. When I was in elementary school, our school had a large library with many books because smartphones were not yet available. Therefore, our teacher encouraged us to visit the library to research our assignments.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas more logically using linking words like 'however' and 'on the other hand'. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'I do not have any ideas' and use 'I am not sure' instead. Make your sentences complete and clear.

Example: I am not sure about this, but based on what I've seen on social media, some Chinese kids still go to the library to do research. However, with the advancement of technology, many prefer to use digital devices for their studies.

× Honestly, I don't go to library very often because I find it less practical nowadays.

✓ Honestly, I don't go to the library very often because I find it less practical nowadays.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× Most of the time I just search for topics I want to learn on Google using my phone so I don't need to travel to the library.

✓ Most of the time I just search for topics I want to learn on Google using my phone so I don't need to travel to the library.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Well, as far as I'm concerned, we usually read books there, research on our thesis or something that we had assignment at school.

✓ Well, as far as I'm concerned, we usually read books there, research our thesis or something that we had an assignment on at school.

The verb 'research' is typically used without the preposition 'on' when followed directly by the object. Also, 'had assignment' is missing an article; it should be 'had an assignment'. The preposition 'on' is better placed after 'assignment' to indicate the topic.

× So that's the least we can do out there.

✓ So that's the least we can do out there.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Yes, of course. When I was in elementary, the our school had a library by that time because smart smartphones are not yet available.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was in elementary school, our school had a library at that time because smartphones were not yet available.

The phrase 'the our school' is incorrect; 'our school' is sufficient. Also, 'in elementary' should be 'in elementary school' for clarity. 'By that time' is better expressed as 'at that time' to indicate a specific past period. 'Smart smartphones' is redundant; 'smartphones' is correct. 'Are not yet available' should be in past tense 'were not yet available' to match the past context.

× So the library is usually big and a lot of books.

✓ So the library was usually big and had a lot of books.

The sentence refers to a past time, so the verb 'is' should be 'was'. Also, 'a lot of books' needs a verb to connect it properly; adding 'had' clarifies the meaning.

× So our teacher encouraged us to go in the library to research our assignments.

✓ So our teacher encouraged us to go to the library to research our assignments.

The correct preposition to use with 'go' when indicating destination is 'to', not 'in'. 'Go to the library' is the proper phrase.

× So that's the time that I went.

✓ So that's the time when I went.

Adding 'when' clarifies the time reference. The original sentence is understandable but adding 'when' improves grammatical correctness.

× Honestly I do not have any ideas about that but as I've seen in social media the kids are also going to the library to do research but I've seen also other way that they are already high tech technology nowadays so they choose to research.

✓ Honestly, I do not have any idea about that, but as I've seen on social media, kids also go to the library to do research. However, I've also seen that nowadays they use high-tech technology, so they choose to research that way.

'Any ideas' should be 'any idea' in this context. 'As I've seen in social media' should be 'on social media'. The sentence is a run-on and needs to be split for clarity. 'I've seen also other way' is awkward; 'I've also seen that' is better. 'They are already high tech technology' is incorrect; it should be 'they use high-tech technology'. The phrase 'choose to research' needs clarification, so 'choose to research that way' is added.