Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'used to be go' and 'stay among the shelf or book.' Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more effectively. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details using linking words.

Example: I used to go to the library every day when I was young because I loved browsing the shelves and borrowing books. It was a peaceful place where I could enjoy reading and learn new things.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better grammar and more precise vocabulary. For example, use 'search for a book' and 'sometimes' instead of 'sometime.' Also, use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about your activities in the library.

Example: I usually search for books in the library when I have an assignment. Additionally, I sometimes enjoy reading there for an hour because it helps me concentrate.

Suggestion: There are grammatical mistakes such as 'when I were a kid' and awkward phrasing like 'I love to be there.' Try to use past tense correctly and more natural expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific details about your experience.

Example: Yes, I did. I went to the library almost every day when I was a kid because I loved being there. Moreover, the library had a computer where I enjoyed playing games.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat vague and repetitive. Try to avoid redundancy like 'usually go often.' Also, provide a clearer opinion with supporting reasons and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: I'm not sure since I'm not Chinese, but I believe many Chinese kids often visit the library because they need to study and find information for their schoolwork.

× I used to be go to the library every day when I was young.

✓ I used to go to the library every day when I was young.

The phrase 'used to be go' is incorrect because 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'be'. The correct form is 'used to go'.

× I love to stay among the shelf or book and find and borrow the book from the library.

✓ I love to stay among the shelves or books and find and borrow books from the library.

The preposition 'among' is correct, but 'shelf' and 'book' should be plural to match the context. Also, 'the book' should be plural 'books' to indicate any books borrowed, not a specific one.

× I usually search a book in a library when I got an assignment and sometime I enjoy reading a book in the library for hour.

✓ I usually search for a book in the library when I have an assignment and sometimes I enjoy reading a book in the library for an hour.

The verb 'search' requires the preposition 'for'. 'A library' should be 'the library' as it refers to a specific place. 'Got' should be present tense 'have' to match 'usually'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'For hour' needs an article 'an' before 'hour'.

× I usually search a book in a library when I got an assignment and sometime I enjoy reading a book in the library for hour.

✓ I usually search for a book in the library when I have an assignment and sometimes I enjoy reading a book in the library for an hour.

The verb 'got' is past tense but the sentence context is habitual action, so present tense 'have' is appropriate.

× Yes, I did. I went to library almost every day when I were a kid.

✓ Yes, I did. I went to the library almost every day when I was a kid.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'were' should be 'was' to agree with the singular subject 'I'.

× I went to library almost every day when I were a kid.

✓ I went to the library almost every day when I was a kid.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'was' in past tense, not 'were' which is used with plural subjects or 'you'.

× There's a computer in the library, so I love to play the game in the computer.

✓ There's a computer in the library, so I love to play games on the computer.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on the computer' is the correct phrase. Also, 'the game' should be plural 'games' to indicate general activity.

× I'm not sure because I'm not Chinese, but I think they usually go often because they have to learn, so they have to enter the library to get some information.

✓ I'm not sure because I'm not Chinese, but I think they usually go often because they have to study, so they have to go to the library to get some information.

The verb 'learn' is less appropriate here; 'study' fits better in this context. Also, 'enter the library' is correct but 'go to the library' is more natural. The modal verb 'have to' is used correctly.