Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like 'a plenty of time' (should be 'plenty of time').

Example: No, I rarely go to the library because there isn't one near my house. Moreover, with many ebooks available online, I find it more convenient to search for information on Google, which saves a lot of time.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat long and could be clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and correct minor errors like 'once in a while' (better as 'occasionally').

Example: Although I haven't visited a public library, I occasionally used my school's library to read books assigned by my teachers. I would spend about an hour reading and then write a summary in my notebook.

Suggestion: Good answer with clear opinion and supporting details. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid repeating 'go to the library' multiple times; use synonyms or pronouns.

Example: I didn't visit libraries often as a child, nor do I now. However, I think libraries offer children a great opportunity to explore various books and cultivate their interests. For instance, by reading different genres, kids can discover new hobbies or sources of inspiration.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid phrases like 'The legacy that I have no clue.' Instead, directly state your lack of knowledge and then give a reasoned opinion. Also, be careful with facts; China is a developed country. Use linking words to improve flow.

Example: I am not sure about the habits of Chinese children since I haven't interacted with them much. However, I believe many Chinese kids visit libraries regularly because education is highly valued, and reading is encouraged to gain knowledge.

× There is no library nearby my house and also because of this generation.

✓ There is no library near my house and also because of this generation.

The preposition 'nearby' is an adverb and should not be used directly before a noun. The correct preposition to use before 'my house' is 'near'. So, 'near my house' is correct.

× There is lots of ebooks online which you can look out for and it saves you a plenty of time just looking up on Google instead of actually visiting the library which consumes lots of time.

✓ There are lots of ebooks online which you can look out for and it saves you plenty of time just looking up on Google instead of actually visiting the library which consumes lots of time.

The noun 'ebooks' is countable plural, so the quantifier should be 'lots of' with plural verb 'are'. Also, 'a plenty of time' is incorrect; 'plenty of time' is the correct phrase without 'a'.

× just looking up on Google instead of actually visiting the library which consumes lots of time.

✓ just looking up Google instead of actually visiting the library which consumes lots of time.

The verb 'look up' when referring to searching information online does not require the preposition 'on'. The correct phrase is 'looking up Google'.

× I did once in a while visit my school's library since I was supposed to write a summary of a book as I was assigned by my teachers for a specific subject, and I would read that for an hour and then I would write down all the details on the notebook.

✓ I did visit my school's library once in a while since I was supposed to write a summary of a book as I was assigned by my teachers for a specific subject, and I would read that for an hour and then I would write down all the details in the notebook.

The phrase 'did once in a while visit' is awkward; the correct order is 'did visit once in a while'. Also, the preposition with 'notebook' should be 'in' not 'on'.

× I would write down all the details on the notebook.

✓ I would write down all the details in the notebook.

The correct preposition to use with 'notebook' is 'in' because the details are written inside the notebook, not on its surface.

× The legacy that I have no clue on this matter since I have never interacted with Chinese students or Chinese citizens.

✓ The legacy is that I have no clue on this matter since I have never interacted with Chinese students or Chinese citizens.

The sentence is missing a verb after 'The legacy'. Adding 'is' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I have no clue on this matter since I have never interacted with Chinese students or Chinese citizens.

✓ I have no clue about this matter since I have never interacted with Chinese students or Chinese citizens.

The correct preposition to use with 'have no clue' is 'about', not 'on'.