Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh như "The library is always be required" và "they are they require". Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library in the afternoon when I don't have classes. It is usually quiet there, so I can focus on my studies without distractions.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại cho câu trả lời và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "there's too many people" (phải là "there are too many people"). Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "study" và "lesson".

Example: I usually study in the library because it is always quiet. This helps me concentrate better on my homework compared to the school's dormitory, where there are too many people in one room.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít, ví dụ "houses" nên là "house" nếu chỉ một nơi. Ngoài ra, câu nên rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I just study at the my houses". Hãy sử dụng thì quá khứ cho hành động đã xảy ra.

Example: I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my house was far from any library, so I just studied at home.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì hiện tại khi nói về thói quen chung và dùng danh từ số nhiều đúng cách như "self-study lessons". Ngoài ra, câu cuối nên dùng cấu trúc đúng "more convenient than going to the library".

Example: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids don't often go to the library because there are many self-study lessons at school. They prefer to stay at school and study by themselves, which is more convenient than going to the library.

× The library is always be required and anyone here comes to the library to study so they are they require.

✓ The library is always required and anyone here comes to the library to study so they need it.

The phrase 'is always be required' is incorrect because 'be' should not be used after 'is always'. The correct form is 'is always required'. Also, 'they are they require' is unclear and likely a misuse of verbs; 'they need it' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× They don't mix any sounds that affect me.

✓ They don't make any sounds that affect me.

The verb 'mix' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'make' when referring to producing sounds. Also, 'any sounds' is correct plural form, but the verb should agree with the intended meaning.

× I usually study in the library, as I would say that the library was always quiet.

✓ I usually study in the library, as I would say that the library is always quiet.

The sentence talks about a habitual present situation, so the present tense 'is' should be used instead of the past tense 'was'.

× Then I can concentrate on my lesson on my homework better than in the school's dorm where there's too many people in one room.

✓ Then I can concentrate on my lessons and my homework better than in the school's dorm where there are too many people in one room.

'Lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to match 'homework' which is uncountable but plural in meaning here. Also, 'there's' (there is) is incorrect for plural 'people'; it should be 'there are'.

× I didn't because my houses were very far away from any library, so I just study at the my houses.

✓ I didn't because my house was very far away from any library, so I just studied at my house.

'Houses' should be singular 'house' to refer to the student's home. 'Study' should be in past tense 'studied' to match the past context. Also, 'the my houses' is incorrect; 'my house' is correct.

× I'm not sure but I think they don't because in China there were so many self study lesson at school so they stay at school and study by themselves.

✓ I'm not sure but I think they don't because in China there are so many self-study lessons at school so they stay at school and study by themselves.

The sentence talks about a general present fact, so 'were' should be 'are'. 'Self study lesson' should be plural 'self-study lessons'. Hyphen is needed in 'self-study' as a compound adjective.

× I think it's more convenient than go to the library.

✓ I think it's more convenient than going to the library.

After 'than', the verb should be in the '-ing' form to compare actions correctly, so 'go' should be 'going'.