Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 発音ミス（"rivalry"や"reverie"は"library"の誤りと思われます）を直し、文法的に正しい文章を作ることが必要です。また、質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

Example: No, I don't often go to the library because it is quite far from my house and I usually study at home.

Suggestion: 文法の誤り（"a library is quite quiet places"など）を修正し、文を完結させることが必要です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、具体的な活動内容を詳しく述べましょう。

Example: I usually study English in the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate. I also often borrow books to help with my studies.

Suggestion: 時制の一貫性を保ち、文法を正しく使いましょう。また、"bookworm"の使い方は良いですが、より自然な表現にすると良いです。

Example: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a child because I liked reading books. I was a bookworm, so I enjoyed spending time there.

Suggestion: 自信のなさを表す表現が多く、話がまとまっていません。質問に対してはっきりとした意見を述べ、理由や根拠を簡潔に説明する練習をしましょう。

Example: I'm not sure because I am Japanese and have never been to China, but I guess Chinese kids don't often go to the library because they might have other places to study.

× I don't usually go to rivalry because, uh, the reverie is quite far from my house and I don't have any plan to go to library.

✓ I don't usually go to the library because, uh, the library is quite far from my house and I don't have any plan to go to the library.

The word 'library' is a countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I usually study English because a library is quite quiet places, so I can concentrate with my study and.

✓ I usually study English because the library is quite a quiet place, so I can concentrate on my study.

When referring to a specific library, 'the' should be used instead of 'a'. Also, 'quiet places' should be singular 'quiet place' to match the singular noun 'library'. The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'concentrate on' is the correct phrase.

× I often lend.

✓ I often borrow books.

The sentence 'I often lend.' is incomplete and unclear. The verb 'lend' requires an object and context. Likely, the student meant to say they borrow books from the library.

× Yeah, I often went to library in my childhood because I like, I liked to read book.

✓ Yeah, I often went to the library in my childhood because I liked to read books.

'Library' is a countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. 'Book' should be plural 'books' to indicate reading multiple books. Also, 'like' should be past tense 'liked' to match the past context.

× I was bookworm, so I went to library.

✓ I was a bookworm, so I went to the library.

The noun 'bookworm' requires the indefinite article 'a'. 'Library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× I think I just touch it. I I guess Chinese kids don't usually go to the live library.

✓ I think I just guess. I guess Chinese kids don't usually go to the library.

The phrase 'live library' is incorrect; it should be 'the library'. Also, 'touch it' is unclear and likely a misuse; 'guess' is more appropriate here.