Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to avoid hesitation and finish your sentences fully. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear reason for your past enjoyment.

Example: I don't go to the library very often nowadays; however, I used to enjoy studying there because it provided a quiet and comfortable atmosphere that helped me concentrate.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some hesitation and minor grammar errors. Try to use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect ideas and avoid filler words. Also, be careful with article usage and plural forms.

Example: I usually study for my mid-term or final exams in the library, and in my free time, I also enjoy reading fiction novels to relax.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, try to add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: Yes, my mom often took me and my brother to the library because she wanted us to learn knowledge beyond what we studied at school.

Suggestion: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently and use complete sentences. Also, use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because most parents want their children to be smart, so they hope their kids can gain various knowledge from books.

× I don't go to the library very often, however, in the past I enjoyed studying in the library which give me a comfortable atmosphere for. Uh.

✓ I don't go to the library very often; however, in the past I enjoyed studying in the library which gave me a comfortable atmosphere.

The verb 'give' should be in the past tense 'gave' to agree with the past tense 'enjoyed'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed punctuation correction for clarity.

× I usually study for my mid term or final exam in library, but in my free time I prefer reading some uh fiction novels for uh relaxing.

✓ I usually study for my midterm or final exam in the library, but in my free time I prefer reading some fiction novels for relaxing.

The phrase 'in library' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the place. Also, 'mid term' should be one word 'midterm'. The filler words 'uh' were removed for clarity.

× Yes, my mom took me and my brother to the library very often because she wished both of us can learn knowledge from books that out of the school.

✓ Yes, my mom took me and my brother to the library very often because she wished both of us could learn knowledge from books outside of school.

The modal verb 'can' should be changed to 'could' to match the past tense 'wished'. Also, 'that out of the school' is incorrect and should be 'outside of school'.

× Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to library because most of uh, Chinese parents want their and kids to be smart, so they hope they can uh, the various, uh, knowledge from the book.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because most Chinese parents want their kids to be smart, so they hope they can gain various knowledge from books.

The phrase 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Their and kids' is incorrect; it should be 'their kids'. The phrase 'the various, uh, knowledge from the book' is awkward and corrected to 'gain various knowledge from books' for clarity and correctness.