Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'honestly speaking' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, correct the article usage before 'introvert' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Keep your answer concise and directly address the question with supporting reasons.

Example: No, I don't often go to the library, maybe not even once a year. I prefer staying at home because I am an introverted person and feel more comfortable in my own space.

Suggestion: Make your sentences complete and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar, such as 'I want to read a specific book that interests me.' Also, clarify your last point about the library being an entertaining place with friends.

Example: When I go to the library, I usually read books that interest me. For example, last time I visited with my friends, and we found the library to be a fun and enjoyable place to spend time together.

Suggestion: Pay attention to subject-verb agreement ('I were' should be 'I was') and avoid incomplete sentences. Provide specific details about your experience and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid filler phrases like 'honestly speaking' unless necessary.

Example: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid, usually with my friends. We enjoyed spending time there, although we didn't always read books; sometimes we just liked exploring the place.

Suggestion: Try to answer the question more directly and improve grammar, such as 'children' instead of 'children's' and 'love' instead of 'are really love.' Use linking words to contrast your knowledge about Chinese kids with your experience in Bangladesh.

Example: I am not sure about Chinese children since I am from Bangladesh. However, in my country, children love going to libraries and often enjoy reading books there.

× I really don't like to go to library or any other kind of places because I am such a introvert person.

✓ I really don't like to go to the library or any other kind of places because I am such an introvert person.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'an' should be used before 'introvert' because it starts with a vowel sound.

× So I love to stay at my room or at my home.

✓ So I love to stay in my room or at my home.

'Stay in' is the correct preposition to use with 'room' because it refers to being inside an enclosed space. 'At' is correct with 'home' as it refers to a general location.

× Whenever I usually go in the library, I do want to read a specific book which is I am interested in.

✓ Whenever I usually go to the library, I want to read a specific book that I am interested in.

'Go to' is the correct preposition to indicate movement towards a place. Also, 'that' is more appropriate than 'which' in this restrictive clause.

× But last time I visited in the library I went with my friends which is really entertainment place and.

✓ But last time I visited the library, I went with my friends, which is a really entertaining place.

'Visited' does not require 'in' after it. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity. 'Entertaining' is the correct adjective form here.

× Yes, I went to the library when I were a kid and I really enjoyed that time.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid and I really enjoyed that time.

'I' requires the verb 'was' in past tense, not 'were'. 'Were' is used with plural subjects or in subjunctive mood.

× I went with my all of my friends and I really love how we enjoyed our library time and honestly speaking, we haven't read any books because.

✓ I went with all of my friends and I really loved how we enjoyed our library time and honestly speaking, we didn't read any books because.

'My all of my friends' is incorrect; 'all of my friends' is correct. Also, past tense 'loved' and 'didn't read' should be used to maintain consistency with past events.

× But in Bangladesh the children's are really love to enjoy the books of libraries so they often go there.

✓ But in Bangladesh, children really love to enjoy the books in libraries, so they often go there.

'Children' is already plural and does not need an apostrophe 's'. Also, 'love' should be used without 'are' in this context. 'In libraries' is the correct prepositional phrase.