Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and pronoun errors, and avoid irrelevant fragments. Use one or two supporting details linked with connectors such as because or so. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Example: No, I don't often go to the library. I prefer reading at home because it's quieter and more comfortable, and if I really like a book I usually buy it so I can keep it and read at my leisure.

Suggestion: Provide a direct topic sentence and use clearer grammar and linking words. Replace vague phrases like "must be" with definite verbs and combine related ideas with 'and' or 'so that'. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences and give a specific example of research or book type.

Example: I mainly use the library to research for assignments and to borrow reference books. For example, last month I used academic journals there to find sources for a history essay.

Suggestion: Answer directly then add a specific supporting detail with correct tense. Use linking words such as because or so to show reason. Avoid present-tense phrases when describing the past and replace informal expressions like "I'm always lost in it" with clearer descriptions.

Example: Yes, I went to the library often when I was a child because we didn't have mobile phones or computers. I spent hours reading storybooks there and I loved getting lost in the stories.

Suggestion: Make the opinion clear and support it with a concise, specific reason. Use correct subject–verb agreement and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Provide one brief example or observation to strengthen the answer.

Example: I don't think many Chinese kids visit libraries nowadays because most have their own smartphones and spend free time playing games. For instance, I see many children using phones after school instead of going to public libraries.

× No, I prefer to read books at my home.

✓ No, I prefer to read books at home.

Use of the definite article 'my' with 'home' is unnecessary in this context. Native speakers say 'at home' rather than 'at my home' when referring to one's own home; remove 'my' for natural phrasing.

× If I likes the books I will buy it and read it at home so that I can and choose one post I like.

✓ If I like a book, I will buy it and read it at home so that I can choose a part I like.

Multiple issues: 'likes' should be 'like' to agree with subject I (subject-verb agreement). Use singular 'a book' instead of 'the books' for general statement. Use 'it' to refer to 'a book' consistently. Remove extraneous 'and' after 'can' and change 'post' (likely wrong word) to 'part' (or 'section') to make sense. Also punctuation and sentence clarity improved.

× I don't often go to the library, but the only reason I went here it must be researching for my assignment documents and and to borrow some books.

✓ I don't often go to the library, but the only reason I came here is to research for my assignment and to borrow some books.

Tense and structure problems: 'went here' should be 'came here' because speaker is describing current visit; 'must be researching' is awkward—use 'is to research' to state purpose. Remove duplicate 'and'. 'Assignment documents' is unnatural; 'my assignment' or 'my assignments' is preferable. Adjusted verb forms for clarity and correct present reference.

× Yes, when I was a kid. I don't have mobile phone and I can't play computer games, so the only entertainment for me is to read books in the library at that time.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I didn't have a mobile phone and I couldn't play computer games, so my only entertainment then was reading books in the library.

When describing past situations, use past tense consistently: 'don't have' -> 'didn't have', 'can't play' -> 'couldn't play'. Also change 'is to read' to past 'was reading' or 'was reading books'—here 'my only entertainment then was reading books' reads naturally. Use 'mobile phone' with an article 'a'.

× I'm always lost in it.

✓ I was always lost in them.

Pronoun reference and tense mismatch: 'I'm' (present) should be 'I was' to match past context. 'It' is unclear; plural 'books' requires 'them'. Saying 'I was always lost in them' means being absorbed by books. Alternatively 'I was always lost in the stories' if preferred.

× No, I don't think so because I noticed that many kids nowadays, uh always has its own it their own phone and and always play games on the phone.

✓ No, I don't think so because I've noticed that many kids nowadays always have their own phones and always play games on them.

Subject-verb agreement: 'kids ... always has' should be 'kids ... always have'. Pronoun and article errors: use 'their own phones' instead of 'its own it their own phone'. Replace duplicate 'and'. Use plural 'phones' and plural pronoun 'them' for clarity. Use present perfect 'I've noticed' or present 'I notice' for ongoing observation.