Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct minor grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g. "prefer to go" + "in my spare time" is fine, but don't repeat habit statements). Use correct collocations ("self-help" and "before school").

Example: Yes, I often go to the library in my spare time. I mainly borrow self-help and fiction books because they expand my vocabulary and spark my imagination. For example, a novel I read last month helped me learn new descriptive phrases. Overall, I usually read there before school, so it has become a useful daily habit.

Suggestion: Improve grammar, clarity and cohesion. Use a clear topic sentence and add linked supporting details. Avoid awkward phrases like "to be brutally honest" and incorrect nouns/adjectives (say "economics, fundamentals and political science books"). Finish sentences fully and use linking words such as "also" or "in addition".

Example: I usually go to the library to study and broaden my knowledge. In addition to books for my courses, I read nonfiction titles on economics, political science and general fundamentals, which help improve my understanding of current affairs. I often sit at a table to take notes and review what I have learned.

Suggestion: Correct tense and sentence structure errors, and be more concise. Use a clear past-tense topic sentence then add a specific example. Avoid fragmented clauses and incorrect verb forms (use "went", "completed").

Example: Yes, I often went to the library as a child when my teacher assigned classwork. For example, whenever we had a research project, I would go to the school library to find books and complete my assignments, which made studying easier.

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and specific. Use a clear topic sentence and give concrete reasons or examples. Correct grammar ("it is quite common in China for children to go to the library") and use linking words like "for example" or "because" to explain the benefits.

Example: Yes, it is quite common in China for children to visit libraries. For example, many schools organize weekly library sessions and children explore different sections—such as picture books and science corners—because this helps them develop reading skills and broaden their horizons.

× Yes, I prefer to go to the library in my spare time.

✓ Yes, I prefer going to the library in my spare time.

Use of 'prefer' is commonly followed by a gerund (prefer doing) when speaking about general habits. 'Prefer to go' is not strictly wrong but 'prefer going' fits natural usage here.

× I mostly read self help and fiction books.

✓ I mostly read self-help and fiction books.

Compound noun 'self-help' requires a hyphen; also plural 'books' is fine. Use hyphen to form correct adjective-noun compound.

× It improves my vocabulary and imagination.

✓ They improve my vocabulary and imagination.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural subjects 'vocabulary and imagination'. Use 'they' or restructure as 'They improve my vocabulary and imagination.'

× Moreover, I usually read before going to school and I think it's a great habit to develop in my daily routine.

✓ Moreover, I usually read before going to school, and I think it's a great habit to develop in my daily routine.

Add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and' joining two independent clauses. Tense and wording are otherwise appropriate.

× To be brutally honest, I go for library to learn something more about the world and related to my studies.

✓ To be honest, I go to the library to learn more about the world and about topics related to my studies.

Multiple issues: 'go for library' is incorrect preposition use ('go to the library'); 'learn something more' is awkward — use 'learn more'; 'and related to my studies' is a fragment; add 'about topics' or 'about' to connect properly.

× Apart from that I sit on the bench and read books like economic, fundamental and political science based books which increases my knowledge and provide.

✓ Apart from that, I sit on a bench and read books such as economics, fundamentals, and political science books, which increase my knowledge and provide insights.

Several errors: need comma after introductory phrase; use 'a bench' not 'the bench' unless specific; 'books like economic, fundamental and political science based books' is redundant—use 'books such as economics, fundamentals, and political science books'; subject-verb agreement 'which increase' matches plural 'books'; 'provide' needs an object—add 'insights'.

× As far as I'm concerned, when I was a kid, I usually go library when my teacher.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, when I was a kid, I usually went to the library when my teacher gave us work.

Tense consistency requires past tense 'went' not 'go'; 'go library' needs preposition 'to the library'; sentence was incomplete — add the verb 'gave' and object to finish the idea.

× Gave us some work, so then I prefer to went in library to completed my work and assignments.

✓ When she gave us some work, I preferred to go to the library to complete my work and assignments.

Fragment 'Gave us some work' must be attached to a subject; 'prefer' should be past 'preferred' for past events; 'to went' is incorrect — use 'to go'; 'in library' should be 'to the library'; 'to completed' should be 'to complete'.

× Yes, it is quite famous scenario in China to go library.

✓ Yes, it is quite a common scenario in China for children to go to the library.

Missing article 'a' before 'famous/common scenario'; 'go library' needs 'go to the library'; 'famous' is odd—'common' fits better with 'scenario'; clarify subject 'children'.

× Especially children go to the library and used different sections which enhances their ability to learn more about the world and offers to broaden their horizons of knowledge.

✓ Especially, children go to the library and use different sections, which enhances their ability to learn more about the world and broadens their horizons.

Tense inconsistency: 'used' should be present 'use' to match general statement; 'which enhances' should agree with singular concept or be consistent—keeping 'enhances' is fine because it refers to the activity as a whole; 'offers to broaden their horizons of knowledge' is awkward—use 'broadens their horizons.'